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Sounds of Life

As I hear clinks of your cups I can listen to orange sounds in your ample eyes I can hear your obvious highs as if nearing a sea Morning in a humming bee You are busy at the mild harsh and tasty sound The butter knife spreading butter on the dark dense toast For the person you love the most Eloquent silence all around Soft munching sound from inside our mouth Mingles with the wind from south The door bell chimes its beautiful tune Like the monsoon Then comes the rustling of newspaper pages The train crossing so many bridges Combines with the rhythmic drumming of the woodpecker The sound of your stirring sugar Bubbling of boiled water in the kettle They settle In a silent sound of a loud red lily in bloom at the window As rain falls in a crescendo The flip flop of your sandals Passing into your bangles clinking together Culminating in the slurp as we sip tea Real moments of pure glee A great strength Against the various wavelengths Of the bang bark bray Throughout the day
_______________________________________________________________ June 19, 2016

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Date: 6/27/2016 9:13:00 PM
We need these types of poems to remind us to appreciate what we too often take for granted. Well described and good use of words without being to flowery. David from NZ
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/28/2016 2:07:00 AM
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Date: 6/24/2016 1:20:00 AM
Very good sounds of the day Probir well written x Xxx wendy
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/24/2016 7:28:00 AM
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Date: 6/23/2016 6:50:00 AM
Probir, You have some lovely imagery in this and plenty of rhyme too. A beautiful combination of sounds which all seem to lead back to celebration of your special person. AnnaLinda
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/23/2016 7:43:00 AM
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Date: 6/22/2016 8:14:00 PM
poetic to the core, the sounds of a loved one in daily routine...my favorite is the silent sound of the loud red lily. And my second favorite the alliteration near the end. Beautiful, Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/23/2016 3:34:00 AM
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Date: 6/21/2016 1:48:00 PM
Very nice
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Date: 6/22/2016 7:30:00 AM
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Date: 6/20/2016 2:45:00 AM
Beautiful descriptions of a wonderful morning, excellently written.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/20/2016 6:43:00 AM
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Date: 6/19/2016 6:51:00 PM
I can hear the sounds....great take in the contest....gl
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/19/2016 8:05:00 PM
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Date: 6/19/2016 12:20:00 PM
wow this is attention to detail, sometimes it's the simplest things that mean so much. Very lovely poem.
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Date: 6/19/2016 8:08:00 PM
Yes. The contest theme called for these sounds. I could have included some more. But I don't like lengthy poems. Thank you for reading and enjoying ...
Date: 6/19/2016 11:54:00 AM
So many sounds we simply take for granted - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/19/2016 8:17:00 PM
That is our culture ! Thank you ...
Date: 6/19/2016 8:48:00 AM
I can picturise it clearly:) Well written:) All the best:)
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Date: 6/19/2016 8:20:00 PM
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Date: 6/19/2016 8:25:00 AM
- Sounds like a beautiful day in a lovely home, Probir .... beautifully written - Best of luck in the contest # a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/19/2016 8:21:00 PM
Thank you for the opening comment in a lovely positive mode ...

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