Sounds In the Sky

The sun melts the milky way
Sending balloons shaped
Like electric eels

While dinosaurs cry rivers
That flow through the eyes and ears
Of every living insult

Filling sanctuaries
For smiling souls
Frozen in laughter

As false god's of mercy
Tremble in canyons
Shimmering with gold

The days are upon us
When all shall see
Reflections of our past

Chasing echo's from
                 
                                 Bellowing


                                               Planets
Shattering
Our existence 
                                

           

09/22/23
5:45 am

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 6/16/2024 4:16:00 AM
Good Morning James. Your execution of the free verse is marvelous. Truly. I like titles and you have a wonderful title with an interesting yet a truth concept. Oh yes those reflections... Thank you for sharing your skilled talent. May this day find you well. (smile)
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Date: 5/1/2024 1:33:00 PM
It has that gravity poet. In a nutshell awesome! Arigatou from Japan
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Date: 11/18/2023 10:26:00 PM
A depth well perceived, James. The riddled epoch idles our existence naturally lest meddlers befouls its pace. Aloha, William
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Date: 10/26/2023 7:32:00 PM
According to science our life span is but a blink in time. By that time we will be the ailiens we look for.
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Date: 10/24/2023 2:19:00 PM
This may well be such an epoch Jimbo.? Everything is charged, there are such claims Of ideaology of holding the high ground yet Terrible atrocitys are done in the same breath.' Well put scenarios here.'
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Date: 10/24/2023 2:18:00 PM
This may well be such an epoch Jimbo.? Everything is charged, there are such claims Of ideaology of holding the high ground yet Terrible atrocitys are done in the same breath.' Well put scenarios here.'
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Date: 10/20/2023 10:48:00 AM
A creative/powerful write. Great ending. Will it come true??? Have a blessed weekend..........
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 10/20/2023 12:13:00 PM
It's here Paula, Angels will guide us...
Date: 10/19/2023 2:31:00 PM
Simply beautiful James! Debx
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 10/20/2023 12:14:00 PM
Thanks Debx!
Date: 10/18/2023 8:50:00 PM
Woah, this is a very deep and heartfelt write, especially that ending line "shattering our existence" is really impactful and does say it all! " Tremble in canyons Shimmering with gold", "The days are upon us When all shall see Reflections of our past" Your wordplay is really exquisite and thought-provoking.. A brilliant poem, loved reading this.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 10/19/2023 9:27:00 AM
Thanks Hiya!
Date: 10/10/2023 6:42:00 PM
i'm wit'cha on this write dear poet! glad to run into you again mr. goff....have a great Autumn sir...much love, james
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 10/19/2023 9:27:00 AM
Thanks James!
Date: 9/24/2023 2:16:00 PM
Your words are so deep my friend, and your heart is as see through as glass, you are truly blessed with a rare gift of honest and an even rarer one of poetic talent. Loved it
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 9/24/2023 3:11:00 PM
Thanks my dear friend
Date: 9/23/2023 2:57:00 PM
James, Such powerful words of creation and destruction . I especially like ~ The days are upon us When all shall see Reflections of our past ! Potent lessons to be learned for sure . Susan :)
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 9/24/2023 12:20:00 PM
Thanks Susan!
Date: 9/22/2023 4:14:00 PM
Hey you did it! Nice Jimbo. Quite apocalyptic really. I especially like the fifth stanza. Time to get our ducks in a row
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 9/23/2023 6:36:00 AM
Thanks Tommy!
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