Sound of Alarm

a beautiful worded piece with such visionary descriptions I have been there in your shoes, they are truly wonderous beauty as well your haiku,,Thank you again for visiting my words,,,Blessings..Cecil

Dear Carrie ,If YOUR walking in the woods YOU should teach YOUR Eyes to see the"PATH to the Prize" YOU Did Not; Hence "My careless footstep" EXCELLENT! So Vivid , so Real LOVE ALWAYS...HG Soup Mail Call about 6th Inning...HG

This is what haiku epitomizes ... a perfect description and a surprising relationship at the end ... congratulation on a feat of genius, my friend.

This has happened to me many times. I can relate to this one.:)-AA

oh wow Carrie! I could hear the silence and then the snap of that twig. Brilliant writing as always my friend. :)

An excellent haiku. Wish I was there to see, that is before you snapped the twig! Teasing you! Love, Shar

The woods and the beauty of it all...this is well done my friend....super work.

I can hear the sound of this Carrie.Rgds Brian

Dear Carrie, Beautiful Haiku my favorite Form Superb ALWAYS...HG Carrie, This truely is a Fun Game It's not very often the FAMILY plays Together But when WE DO ALWAYS...HG