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Souls Lost

we will win knowledge she said as he took the bite - their souls were lost December 23, 2018

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Bobby May

Date: 1/26/2019 12:19:00 PM

Wow! so few words and so much said!

John Gondolf
Date: 1/26/2019 12:29:00 PM

Thanks, Bobby, it's easy to say so much in so few words when everyone knows the story. John

Pashang Salehi

Date: 12/26/2018 8:56:00 PM

Indeed we did... Thanks to mama... Congratulations.

John Gondolf
Date: 12/26/2018 9:18:00 PM

Thanks, Pashang, I appreciate it. John

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2018 4:39:00 PM

Did you ever think what would have happened if they had not taken the bite? None of us would ever have been born!! Anyway, I am glad to see this a winner. Congratulations.

John Gondolf
Date: 12/26/2018 6:27:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea, I appreciate your support. John

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/25/2018 10:16:00 PM

Congratulations John, on this win. Sometimes, a few words can say so much. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf
Date: 12/26/2018 3:59:00 AM

Thank you, Brandy, I appreciate you and your thoughts. John

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/25/2018 1:55:00 PM

- Congratulations on your "one liner", John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Gondolf
Date: 12/25/2018 6:20:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise, I appreciate it. John

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/25/2018 10:50:00 AM

The Book of Genesis bears a powerful lesson that you capture well, John. Congratulations on your first-place win in Silent One's contest! Merry Christmas, Carolyn

John Gondolf
Date: 12/25/2018 12:45:00 PM

Thank you, Carolyn, I appreciate your support. John

Silent One

Date: 12/25/2018 6:40:00 AM

Now, Mr Gondolf... This is really deep, and it can have many thoughts... Are you saying we humans are losers as a result of our ancestors eating apples? Lol.. Loved it... Have a great day.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

John Gondolf
Date: 12/25/2018 7:05:00 AM

Thanks, Silent One, I appreciate it and thanks for hosting the contest.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/24/2018 10:25:00 AM

Knowledge without salvation lands one in the pit! Merry Christmas, John!

John Gondolf
Date: 12/24/2018 10:43:00 AM

Thank you, Kim, you are so right. Merry Christmas to you and your family! John

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/24/2018 10:08:00 AM

John, you have made perfect use of every syllable! Great monoku! Janice

John Gondolf
Date: 12/24/2018 10:41:00 AM

Thank you, Janice, I appreciate your comments. John

Winged Warrior

Date: 12/24/2018 9:52:00 AM

We're still lost...lovely monoku...have a wonderful holiday season John...love & light...^WW^

John Gondolf
Date: 12/24/2018 10:39:00 AM

Thanks, WW, peace and love...

Eve Roper

Date: 12/24/2018 9:35:00 AM

John, this is a very good Monoku for the contest... Good luck.. Merry Christmas to you and all your family,, Hugs Eve ~`*

John Gondolf
Date: 12/24/2018 10:38:00 AM

Thank you, Eve, merry Christmas!

Paul Callus

Date: 12/24/2018 7:15:00 AM

Just like Adam & Eve, we often find temptation in one another, John, and later we might stand to regret it! Yours is a winning monoku! Happy Christmas!! // paul

John Gondolf
Date: 12/24/2018 9:53:00 AM

Thanks, Paul, I appreciate your comments. John

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/23/2018 7:27:00 PM

Indeed! You have captured this perfectly my friend, this truth. It's sad, as there are so many lost in the world. Now. This is so beautifully written and presented. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf
Date: 12/23/2018 7:37:00 PM

Thank you, Brandy, you’re so correct...and women have been leading men astray since the beginning of time... ;). I appreciate you and your thoughts my friend. John

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/23/2018 12:39:00 PM

Hi John, Good one-liner About Adam and Eve. I'm having a hard time coming up with one. It looks like a winner to me. I wish the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

John Gondolf
Date: 12/23/2018 1:00:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis, I appreciate your comments and support. John