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Elation Vibrations

In my eighteenth Spring, strangers used brotherhood as decorative ribbons to gift me a feel and a truth that have staid my life long. At a nature-adorned ranch flowed a celebratory wedding reception upon soft green field carpets so lush they matched the gentle generosity of my invite; I was a welcomed wanderer, a presence made to feel valued. Love in sincere smiles became hand-to-hand holding, loose, swaying arms, and uninhibited kicks from dancing legs all moving carefree bodies in a spontaneous, jubilant-circle of dance. In a flash-know, I felt harmonious sensations empower all to unite in the spiritual perfection from which we had come and would, in time, return as brothers and sisters gone home.
sun rays beam pleasure when brotherhood dances free ~ breeze brings heavens kiss
Vibrations of elations brightened the sun’s own light and dissolved all human egos’ need-feed to be acknowledged as right. I knew none of the faces yet I knew them all, just as they knew me, for a mutual dance feel took us inside core truth; all were one in the same, from the same one of perfect love. Such knowing elated my dance with soul-intoxication. The air continued piping in rock’s most poignant lyrics sung by genuine, emotive voices that grabbed us all while drums beat as one with our hearts until our pulses ignited, and guitars glided on soared, radiating nirvana-highs through our inside-otherness; and, these sensations led me to know, as I still know, dancing that unexpected afternoon was more important to my life’s truth than many of the human important things I had been taught were true life.
tunes lift angels flights while earthbound souls fly in dance songs elevate faith
July 2, 2018 Caren Krutsinger's HEY WRITE ME A HAPPY HAIBUN

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Date: 8/3/2019 7:37:00 PM
It is always such a joy to read your exquisite poetry, dear CayCay, and your wonderful and heartwarming haibun is no exception. I enjoyed being swept up and away on elation vibrations. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/2/2019 6:24:00 AM
Wonderful CayCay. Bring it on home sister. Fantastic write! Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs Charlie
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Date: 7/19/2018 12:36:00 AM
Congratulations CayCay! A beautiful way to bring it all "home" and remind us that we will all be returning some day.
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Date: 7/7/2018 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your prose knows no bounds. The same for your word use. Enjoyed this!
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Date: 7/5/2018 2:20:00 PM
Congrats on the winners' list, Caycay. Soupmail for ya.
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Date: 7/5/2018 11:15:00 AM
Wonderful Haibun Cay Cay, delighting the senses...
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Date: 7/5/2018 8:30:00 AM
Again the prose I could not fault. However, what you classified as haiku contained no kigo and had it not been for your perfect prose your haibun would of been N/A'ed. My most gracious thanks for participating, look forward to your continued support, with respect, Mick
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Date: 7/5/2018 7:09:00 AM
Another Brilliant work, makes me think I should work harder at my stuff. lol
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Date: 7/4/2018 7:58:00 PM
Beautifully crafted Cay Cay...a divine write...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 7/3/2018 3:21:00 PM
a profound write this is, Caycay, on the magical power of music. I think I would have loved being there with you. Awesome!
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Date: 7/3/2018 3:21:00 PM
Off to the doctor's at 3. Will I ever solve the riddle of what is wrong with me? Who knows?
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Date: 7/3/2018 1:20:00 PM
- Your poems are always so beautifully wrapped CayCay ... as the most beautiful gift under the Christmas tree ... - Best wishes in the contest ... I'm sure this is a top win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/3/2018 11:56:00 AM
Sorry to hear about your concussion dear heart. YOur haibun is a masterpiece, and a feast to the sense. Praying for winning wishes for you. And a peaceful recovery from your headaches, My heart goes out to you.
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Date: 7/3/2018 12:03:00 AM
Cay Cay, I loved reading your poem this evening with a delightful bedtime tea. I look forward to reading more of your creative works tomorrow.. sleep well!
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Date: 7/2/2018 8:36:00 PM
Such an incredible haibun, Cay Cay.. So profound and certainly touches the soul!! I enjoyed it tremendously.. Many blessings!!
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Date: 7/2/2018 9:52:00 AM
Beautiful haibun CayCay Good luck in the contest Tom
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