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Written for pick a title contest sponsored by Edward Ibeh

Another lost noon, engraved as unforgettable memoirs within my mind, I’m rethinking of rewriting and rewinding revoked reflections of a love rekindled. My eager heart is now hanging in the void, yearning to swirl through desert dunes to exhale one more dandelion dream in the same air as you, where quill and paper were no longer needed. For times that I was inking meaningless phrases, were buried deep down under, as you were softly scribbling dewy verses of desires upon my desolated skin, rescuing darkness with starving sincerity, illuminating and hydrating my urges with prolific praising, moulding every imperfection of mine into an abstract art, naming them with prismatic gems on the night of confession, beneath a sky full of stars that were burning. I’m now left with no adjectives to alliterate, how this sunflower soul’s cry bloomed within your healing embrace, where hailing emotions were eased; I knew then, that’s where I’ve for so long wanted to belong. The whirling gusts of greedy gardenias may say roses aren’t fragrant, but why am I yearning to be the Juliet rose in your graceful garden, where petals glow like rainbow-hued stardust, I’m on a virtual venture, wishing I had Aladdin’s vintage lamp; to grant me my dose of you and I. If only I could ride above Arabian valleys; on an amethyst magic carpet, stitched with crystalline crescent sequins. If only you could feel, I’ve been dreaming of daisy meadows and dahlia lawns, where memories are fatal, pushing me into a labyrinth of mourning magnolias, searching for balanced brightness, although you still wander through a foreign land~ faraway from “us”. I hear your wings adorned with orchestric ornaments ascending into the celestial fields, leaving me in an astral connection, with a jar of memories, where I still keep falling for you, time and time again, as you are my beginning and ending, the amorous poet that wouldn’t take love for granted~ like the pirates of this heart-shaped odyssey. And I shall forever be reliving the fabulous February, spent in your golden presence; although, days together were somewhat short and nights were long, we will rephrase this romance relentlessly into an everlasting love story.

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Date: 3/19/2024 4:36:00 AM
Wow, Inky, this is such a captivating write; the vocabulary, the alliteration, the metaphors, the imagery...all top-notch! Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest! Faved.
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Date: 3/19/2024 4:52:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear EI. Im so grateful that you like my crazy metaphors and also that you fave my poem. Appreciate your support always
Date: 3/19/2024 12:26:00 AM
“dandelion dream in the same air as you, where quill and paper were no longer needed. For times that I was inking meaningless phrases, were buried deep down under, as you were softly scribbling dewy verses” So many favorite verses to name no wonder your poem is a winner! A fav too! Congratulations
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Date: 3/19/2024 4:53:00 AM
Awwn karen thank you so very much truly
Date: 3/13/2024 9:39:00 PM
A FAV for my list, Inky. I love the way you weave alliteration throughout your poetry, it helps the rhythm and flow of your poetic words. The soul cries out to the memories of the truth you experienced in Love that is not completed yet. The hope of fulfillment is still there at the soul level. Good luck in the contest, my dear friend. Many good entries for this one. Love and Light always. Bill
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Date: 3/19/2024 4:55:00 AM
Thank you always
Date: 3/13/2024 7:42:00 PM
What a lovely share. I accept the will to keep good memories in a jar and peep in when you want to feel that love that you wanted to be more. The best kinds of love are never forgotten even with a short frame because they do so much in a short time, it feels like years. "moulding every imperfection of mine into an abstract art, naming them with prismatic gems." This is what love is, accepting everything that comes with the person. Art is perfection covered in flaws.
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Date: 3/13/2024 11:17:00 PM
Thank you for such a deep and profound comment dear tonye. Youv really felt the depth of my lines, and what more can one give a poet than to make them feel heard and seen? Im forever grateful really.
Date: 3/13/2024 5:56:00 PM
Powerful diction- such strength in your soul's cry- very cutting to the core of love! A real pleasure to read! <3
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Date: 3/13/2024 11:09:00 PM
Thank you so much sweet paige i appreciate you always supporting me truly, you are so kind and generous
Date: 3/13/2024 5:12:00 PM
I could feel your soul crying, dearest Ink, as you yearned for a reunion with someone you love. How romantic! Falling for you time and time again...what a testament to true love. What a journey you took me on with your graceful and vivid imagery. (labyrinth of mourning magnolias, searching for balanced brightness) Your heartfelt emotions touched my heart. Oh what skill you possess. Reading your poetry is mesmerizing. hug, Sara
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Date: 3/13/2024 11:07:00 PM
Thank you so very much dear sara for taking your time to visit and leave such heartfelt feedback. Im grateful for your support and i appreciate you pointing out lines that you liked too. How kind and generous of you. Sending you light always
Date: 3/13/2024 4:30:00 PM
"Exhaling dandelion dreams while yearning to be a Juliet rose in love's garden", Well penned empress
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Date: 3/13/2024 10:56:00 PM
Thank you so much dear joseph. Im grateful for your kind support
Date: 3/13/2024 4:17:00 PM
Awesome write very well written.
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Date: 3/13/2024 10:54:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comment and visit. Grateful always
Date: 3/13/2024 4:17:00 PM
Dearest Empress, you took me on a breathtaking journey through the depths of longing and love. The imagery of dandelion dreams and dewy verses evokes a sense of tender intimacy, while the metaphor of the Juliet rose in a graceful garden speaks to the longing for belonging and connection. I loved your longing for a love that transcends distance is palpable, as is the bittersweet beauty of memories cherished and moments treasured. Empress, You created a marvelous testament to the power of love to endure, to transform, and to etch its mark upon the soul. Amen! Blessings Daniel
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Date: 3/13/2024 10:45:00 PM
Thank you so much for always reading and grasping little nuances to leave such profound feedback on my poems dear daniel, im grateful for your support and for your generosity in giving my poems time to read and comment. Readers like you are rare . Blessings
Date: 3/13/2024 3:12:00 PM
IE, when there is a combination of meaningful interactions and talk as well as physical attraction, you have something special--something we would never get tired of. Based on what I read here, I imagine you've felt that euphoric feeling. These feelings are very potent and we might do all sorts of begging to try to rekindle whatever was lost or suspended. I often wonder if this feeling can really last and what triggers it. It's a bit of a mystery and could it be part fantasy? I am uncertain.
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Date: 3/13/2024 10:43:00 PM
Dear duke, your comments are always so heartfelt and so very mindful, you do pay attention to little details when reading and that is an honor for any poet . Im grateful for your support and i mostly write emotions or things i observe and are close to my heart but ofcourse my metaphors may make it seem like fantasy. Thank you again dear duke
Date: 3/13/2024 2:09:00 PM
A starved maiden awaiting at hope's lighthouse(I do not know the work) but it appears it could be a soldier serving in the middle east with a lover writing to, wishing visit and circumstance powered by wishes-morphed into magic carpet and lamp. Forever and stamped?
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Date: 3/13/2024 10:37:00 PM
Ah yes middle east is somehow involved haha. Great observation dear jude. Thank you so much for reading and for your feedback im truly grateful
Date: 3/13/2024 1:33:00 PM
Oh wow. wow, wow this is so romantic and full of passion and love I have to fav this poem I think it should make poem of the or even poem of the week thats what it deserves hugs Shadow
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Date: 3/13/2024 10:37:00 PM
Awwn dear shadow, that makes me so very happy to read that you loved the poem, thank you so very much for the fave and support im truly grateful always
Date: 3/13/2024 1:14:00 PM
Hey Ink, I could feel the pangs of yearning in your poem.. It is never easy when we are away from the beloved.. The longing for reunion is obvious throughout the poem, expressed through vivid imagery of vintage lamps, magic carpets, and dreams of daisy meadows. Despite the physical distance between them, the connection remains astral and timeless, as the speaker holds onto memories and dreams of an everlasting love story... testament to the enduring power of love and the longing for connection, beautifully expressed through rich imagery and heartfelt emotion.
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Date: 3/13/2024 10:36:00 PM
Awn thank you so much dear silent one for understanding and for feeling the emotions and longing flowing through my hazy write. Im always grateful for your support and inspiration. You are truly a poetic gem
Date: 3/13/2024 9:45:00 AM
Dear Ink, your work is a splendid portrayal, gracefully residing in the realms of love. The enchanting choice of words and metaphors enhances the exquisite nature of your poem. It is within the embrace of your healing words that the longing of my soul, akin to a blooming sunflower, finds solace. This is where you have yearned to belong for so long. The amorous poet, cherish love and never takes it for granted. Your talent remains exceptional, as always. A favorite indeed!
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Date: 3/13/2024 10:35:00 AM
Thank you so much for the very kind and generous feedback dr sotto im always grateful for your consistent support truly
Date: 3/13/2024 8:05:00 AM
Soul's cry for a happy ending in your love story, beautifully scribed, IE:)
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Date: 3/13/2024 10:15:00 AM
Awwn thank you so much its so good to see you here. Reading my poem. Grateful for your support
Date: 3/13/2024 7:52:00 AM
I hope I got this right that the rewriting rekindling means taking another look at a relationship. I enjoyed the images. I wish happiness to you.
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Date: 3/13/2024 10:11:00 AM
Awwn thank you so much, no second chances haha for relationships. This is about being away from beloved and souls cry to be reunited. Im so glad you took time to read and even more grateful for your generous feedback
Date: 3/13/2024 6:51:00 AM
An elegant depiction, my friend--fabulously dwelling in realms of love. Charming words and metaphors enhance the beauty of your poem, Ink---how this sunflower soul’s cry bloomed within your healing embrace, where hailing emotions were eased; I knew then, that’s where I’ve for so long wanted to belong-- as you are my beginning and ending, the amorous poet that wouldn’t take love for granted--Excellent as always! A FAVE!!
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Date: 3/13/2024 9:56:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear Vijay for your kind and generous support, and the fave too. Im always so grateful for your poetic presence,
Date: 3/13/2024 5:58:00 AM
Hi Empress, I can hear your soul's cry for a renewed connection with one who you consider as the be all and end of all life, your beginning and ending. May your dreams for' daisy meadows and dahlia lawns' be realized. You have umpteen desires in your heart....."I’m on a virtual venture, wishing I had Aladdin’s vintage lamp; to grant me my dose of you and I. If only I could ride above Arabian valleys; on an amethyst magic carpet, stitched with crystalline crescent sequins." I am also eager to see these longings fulfilled and your broken relationship rephrased into an everlasting romance" Beautiful poem unmatched in the passion of love.
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Date: 3/13/2024 9:55:00 AM
Awwn sweet valsa your comments always make my day, im truly grateful for your kind and generous support truly, thank you for being so mindful with your reading and feedback, sending you light always
Date: 3/13/2024 5:10:00 AM
A truly wonderful piece.
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Date: 3/13/2024 9:54:00 AM
Thank you so much i appreciate your visit
Date: 3/13/2024 3:21:00 AM
Another lost noon, engraved as unforgettable memoirs within my mind, oooo love the build up!! rethinking of rewriting and rewinding revoked reflections of a love rekindled. Mmmm all that rrrrrrrrsss papi!!! Just so rrrrremarkable moulding every imperfection of mine into an abstract art,naming them with prismatic gems…aww !!! leaving me in an astral connection, with a jar of memories,where I still keep falling for you, these lines!! rephrase romance relentlessly into an everlasting love story. Amen
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Date: 3/13/2024 9:52:00 AM
Ah thank u papi haha u read my poem so thoroughly
Date: 3/13/2024 3:07:00 AM
- Emotional immersion in every line, Ink - Putting feelings into words is not always so easy - Beautiful poem :) - hugs
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Date: 3/13/2024 9:51:00 AM
Thank you so much dear anne lise always grateful for your kind support
Date: 3/13/2024 2:30:00 AM
Your poetry is just too good . It took me to another dream . So beautiful . Love it
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Date: 3/13/2024 9:51:00 AM
Awn how sweet thank u dahlin

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