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For Pick A Title Volume 42 Poetry Contest sponsored by Edward Ibeh

Soul's laugh soul's cry Soul's live soul's die But what of the soul's of trees Sipping soil in which we bleed Nature uses our body to feed Colorful tears shed are leaves Falling like a ballet in breeze Whimsical dramatic blue melody Trees that stand as nations fall Despite wars in lands they stand tall Hearing all our tales bittersweet Fearing our own power in peak Chopping trees down despite need Shrilling sound of dying greenery The soul's of men hang low Hanging then during Jim Crow Brown bodies lynched from branch Trees do scream in this land But we ignore, don't listen at all Animals we are and sure to fall If we don't learn to hazel hear Trees that cry colorful leaf tears

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Date: 3/19/2024 4:31:00 AM
Amazing piece of work here, Karen. I loved the 3rd stanza, especially. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/19/2024 5:28:00 AM
Edward I was intrigued by your creative contest and surprised by the win what an honor! Thanks for the inspiring title!
Date: 3/19/2024 1:08:00 AM
Trees are biblically symbolic and spiritual. A natural source of nourishments and place for shaded rest. My compliments for your win, Karen. Aloha, William
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/19/2024 1:43:00 AM
Thank you William!
Date: 3/5/2024 11:31:00 AM
this poem resonated with me because I believe that trees hurt when we cut them down. Trees have been misused for lynchings as well. Yet, they stand tall even when nations and people fall and falter. Great strength and lessons to be learned with trees. (Book I like is titled THE SECRET LIFE OF TREES--you might like it as well)
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/5/2024 2:09:00 PM
I will check that book out thanks!
Date: 3/4/2024 7:18:00 PM
Powerful write, Karen. You turned a mere tree into a scion of nature and history. Bravo, Gershon
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Karen Jones
Date: 3/4/2024 7:43:00 PM
Thank you dear Gershon

Book: Shattered Sighs