Soul Took Flight

Clouds obscured the moonbeams There were no stars in sight Fantasy was hindered But my soul took to flight

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Robin Davis

Date: 6/9/2014 11:38:00 PM

Sara This is a creative and interesting write that takes the reader to new heights. Thank you for the sweet comment on my Her Dream Boy poem.

Michael Ainsley

Date: 4/18/2013 3:40:00 PM

Vary nice Sara I am on the same wave length.

Poet Tacito

Date: 4/3/2013 10:35:00 AM

Fly high! Wonderful!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/3/2013 10:25:00 AM

- .... ohhh ... so beautiful, Sara! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/3/2013 9:52:00 AM

Oh yes this beautiful Sara...

Judy Konos

Date: 4/3/2013 6:07:00 AM

Like it....thanks

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/3/2013 5:33:00 AM

Beautiful, this is simply a gorgeous and wondrous write my friend! You have fascinated me by the possibility of flight through the moonbeams(or lack thereof as in your poem!)...I'm always inspired by the moon so any poem about that is truly awesome to me! This is quite the fabulous piece, Great Work!!