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Soul Stance River - 1

The natives believe that the Mississippi River carries the souls of their ancestors into the water of judgment wherein they will either enter the Sun's fire of joy or sit in the ice of the Moon having their feathers counted and examined, I suspect that when we, The Corps of Discovery accomplish our mission this Grandfather river will haunt us like a deep dream that fights Time, He is an American river now, an avenue for the trade of empire, substance and soul, President Jefferson purchased the Louisiana Territory from Napoleon in 1803 for 15 million dollars, enough gold to build a bed with and a landscape large enough to construct a nation on, it is now summer of 1804 and with hearts, rifles and ores we explore into lands that lurk with life old as oceans and tribes ageless in tribulation, we are three dozen men whom hunt not warriors or wealth raiding and rapine be not our pleasure, war party song our spirit sings not, we are agents of destiny, emissaries of Washington and explorers of the Northwest Passage, the Spanish, French, and English already have merchants and mercenaries peppered in remote areas of lucrative wilderness furs, precious metals and trade routes lay naked to the will of disciplined conquest, for the Indians survival is the business, their heritage hinges on heroism, everyone has a claim yet only one power will reign, J.A.B.

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Date: 2/17/2016 2:39:00 PM
I see I have a lot of catching up to do on the mighty Mississippi. History is so often neglected these days so it is a rare gem to find. I have started in by reading the first and I am captivated by line seven, "He is an American river now..." I will look forward to finishing the series as I can. SuZ
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/18/2016 12:26:00 PM
Continued...I knew it was the ideal way to launch my heart and soul into this great work, and would honor the Corps of Discovery, the Indians, and also the craft of Poetry. What you acknowledge is a profound expression with import to ownership, destiny, conquest, the Mississippi became a true allie, and wonder, and through the Louisiana Purchase became American territory, although, in truth, the river is part owner of America Suzanne...J.A.B.
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Date: 2/18/2016 12:20:00 PM
The spiritual legend of the Mississippi that I layout in the opening of this epic is a story my own soul told me about the river and I how perceived it's purpose and meaning, I felt as a Native Human as I explored this vision Suzanne. There is no Native American legend such as this that I know of, its an original insight of my soul. The vision and meaning came to me very suddenly, it was so illuminating, like an initiation into this historic adventure...J.A.B.
Date: 2/16/2016 11:49:00 PM
Entranced. I don't believe I've read this story side of you. There's a wonderful feeling of discovery, as you bring to life history ... but also a tinge of sadness as a multitude of diverse cultures were slowly coming into extinction, where they preached about Mother Earth and Father Sky, and the Great Spirit. Am curious how this saga will twist and turn...
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Date: 12/29/2015 8:31:00 PM
All will become more clear as the sediment of self-justification & lust settles to the rivers bed Justin, enjoyed stopping today, will try to read some more of this series.'
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Justin Bordner
Date: 12/29/2015 11:16:00 PM
Don't try, just read it Joe, this epic has so much to offer you Poet...justification always rides the current of motive, thank you my friend...J.A.B.
Date: 12/28/2015 7:03:00 PM
Justin, I like Charmaine thank you for sharing a part of history. I will go and read the next one. I'm delighted to see you sharing your remarkable pen more often-Alexis 7
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Justin Bordner
Date: 12/29/2015 11:12:00 PM
Alexis, you are a hot and vibrant Poetess that knows History can be the pillar of wisdom and the kiss of Art. I'm so happy with your visit...J.A.B.
Date: 12/20/2015 12:22:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this important history through your poetic words ... I will go and read the following one .
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Justin Bordner
Date: 12/20/2015 6:56:00 PM
Continued...I have felt as kindred spirit to them, they tattooed my soul, and for more than 10 years I've been planning a Tribute composition to honor them. I decided now was the right time to commit to such an undertaking, for my ability can match the demands of this endeavor.I'm so thankful to Providence, and so proud that I made this goal a reality my Lady Hawk...J.A.B.
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Date: 12/20/2015 6:50:00 PM
Their story is one of the greatest epic adventures not just of American Historty, but of World History Charma. When I found out about them as a young man I just said to myself, wow, now here is a challenge worth livin for, learning about, and celebrating...J.A.B
Date: 12/13/2015 8:24:00 PM
This is a treat to read Justin...really enjoying it tonight!!! Love always, Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 12/14/2015 1:35:00 AM
Bringing History to life is beautiful, like you my sweet and fierce Poetess! There is so much more to post, so much more beauty and intensity...J.A.B.

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