Soul Sliding

I was born here
 along the salty waters of the Atlantic
 where wind and rain, ice and snow
 are blown out to the ocean depths.
I watched the sunrise
 when I was still a child
 cooling my toes in the sands on the shore
 warming my face in the sun as it rose on the horizon.

I lived the days in quiet, peaceful solitude
 until you, and then
 it was the two of us
 walking the shoreline eyeing the sea.

We walked and talked of dreams
 full of the plans for living
 and live, we did well those fifty years
 always as one, together.

Tonight, as sunset slides in on the tides
 I walk alone, missing you
 sitting on the driftwood that floated in
 I am called to the edge.

The world and all its troubles slip away
 buffeted by tidal waves and whale song
 I see life goes on
 as the soul rests calm, longing for the sea.
 

for Chantelle Anne Cooke's Slipping Soul Sunset
4/25/20
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Wolf Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 6:00 PM
Sweet! … and congrats. :) gw
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 4:34 PM
Your lovely poem is poignant and very beautiful DM. I can imagine how difficult it was for Chantelle to judge this contest. Congratulations on your podium win! xxoo
Goldsmith Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 1:45 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your poem and picture tell a wonderful story. Wish I could walk your beach...........
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