Soul Rise

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When the sun came up~the souls weakened~and the dawn ended up breaking.

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Date: 5/22/2021 12:54:00 PM

Charming poem, Lasaad ~

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/22/2021 1:38:00 PM

Appreciate your nice feedback, Line, thank you

Date: 5/11/2021 9:51:00 PM

A divine monoku, Lasaad. It seems as if it'll be a beautiful day. Blessings, Evelyn

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/12/2021 1:10:00 AM

Thanks for the kind words Evelyn, hopefully it will be a good day for all of us, hugs and regards

Date: 5/7/2021 4:43:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work. A beautiful snapshot. I enjoy the morning very much because of the great beauty. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/7/2021 7:36:00 AM

Thank you so much for the kind words, dear Sara; stay safe, hugs, and best regards