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This ekphrasis has been written for Seth Pina's contest ~ 'Skeletons'

Inspired by the artwork ~ Ghosts on a Tree, by Franz Sedlacek, 1933.

 

Soul of the Skeleton


h e a r  this  h e a r t … 
as hurt hangs low 
with cursed fidelity 
of fame-lit fakeness,
attached to expectations ~ 
as wraith-leaves coil 
around my neck,
under the veil 
of mockingbirds,
wearing a cape of blames 
and futile boldness,
caught up in 
the hypocritic hisses,
where life is tangled 
in a sprawling spool 
of moon-moths ~
dwindling in 
dreamless desires 
where materialistic 
monks lilt away 
in fatal laughs,
and your crimes
remain lethal,
mummified like a 
feather-dressed devil,
taming the loyalty 
that laments 
without the lustre 
of Lucifer
in calcified flames … 

lifeless … I lurk ~
in the estuary 
of dyslexic dialects
running across 
those spinal clusters ~
stemming aimlessly,
from the 
kryptonite backbone 
of kohl-kissed sky,
these headless 
accusations 
cannot kill me 
with the haunt 
of telepathic terror,
because, I am 
massacred till the 
apocalypse of ashes,
pressed between 
barbaric petals
of sunset sapiens 
and sea-smiths,
one amongst the 
awakened dead ,
feasted upon 
and forgotten ~
by those 
opportunistic 
omen-keepers
roaring in the 
carcasses of 
vivacious vultures …

some skeletons 
do not weep 
waning fossils  ~
within fondescent tombs,
rather, they 
metamorphose 
into a twilight-
tipped tree ,
bearing the burden 
of unblossomed 
spirits who refuse
to let go ~
of their delusional 
weightlessness,
as they remain 
a shackled souvenir 
of satanic inflictions,
that the reaper 
could not obliviate.

so, you cannot 
set me aflame 
with aries eyes,
for, there … uprooted,
I am the Madonna ,
the skull of a 
hopeless sorceress 
left abandoned ,
as an obsidian oasis 
of the femme fatale,
shipwrecked 
in your deserted heart …
for, this horizon is nothing,
but a vessel of venom,
a framework 
made of bones 
and stardust frost ~
where poets perish 
pulse by pulse ,
and souls lurk 
in osteoporotic caves,
like ticking grenades 
in the monet of time …

" but I wish, 

if only my satanic tears 
could be touched by painless paint ~

unafraid to the horror ,
of the artist's frozen eternity … "






*** Inspired by the artwork ~ Ghosts on a Tree, by Franz Sedlacek, 1933.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 4:48 AM
An amazing picture that greatly inspired you. Your imagery and poetic devices are off the charts! 😍 They need a wowsa emoji.
Daniel Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 3:15 AM
Hi Hiya, great inspiration for this theme and what a masterclass this is, simply stunning🥰
Sharma  Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 12:52 AM
✨🌙🌸🥰💕🌹 - my first ever set of emojis on soup 🔥😍 emojis are innnnn! Yaeaaayyyy
Kerr Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 5:15 AM
The acme of peerless poetic mastery, Hiya, It was a privilege to absorb your ample flourishes and your premiere pairings so appropriate to your every word choice. It has a dark beauty beyond comparison. Best of luck with this. Howard
George Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 9:47 PM
What an in-depth analysis of the art work- Ghosts on a Tree. Against entries of this profundity, I am ashamed to post my poem on a skeleton written and posted sometime ago and now altered with some slight modifications. Shiya, you are a poet of an extraordinary mettle like your 'twin sister'. You are a powerhouse of metaphors and alliterations. 'opportunistic omen-keepers roaring in the carcasses of vivacious vultures' …and "tipped tree , bearing the burden of unblossomed spirits who refuse to let go ~ of their delusional weightlessness", These descriptions match perfectly with the image. Your poems keep growing as we read again and again! A top winner, for sure.
Kavanagh  Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 4:12 PM
So much darkness going on here in your powerhouse Ekphrasis Hiya, yet one image in particular stands out for me, those materialistic monks lilting away in fatalistic laughs, I love oxymorons and you have created a truly original one here, the mind boggles and races at times, exactly as you designed it, in a kafkaesque manner without the bureaucracy, brilliant! cheers David
Roni Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 2:34 PM
its rich symbolism and relentless imagery transform suffering into something both terrifying and profoundly beautiful. Well written. Thank you for sharing.
Kauffman Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 11:18 AM
Dear Hiya, your poetic artistry with words and singularly unique lines always leaves me wanting to read more and read your work again and again. Your words are dark as despair. Your lines never lose energy as they portray "the dark night of the soul." Yet, while the flesh is absent, the skeleton remains. And, even though the soul is captive in the bones, the bones seem to shelter the soul while bone is more enduring than flesh. This is masterfully written. Blessings of joy in darkness!
May Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 11:13 AM
"Lurking in the estuary of dyslexic dialects, a femme fatale shipwrecked in a deserted heart" You pen weaves words beautifully
Sharma  Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 7:32 AM
Oh dear Joseph! I'm so delighted to see your visit on my poem, so grateful ~ I'm happy that you liked that line especially! Thank you for quoting! Sending you starlight and soothing sparkles 💫💫💜💜✨✨
Poet Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 8:12 AM
The concept of a soul trapped inside a metaphorical skeleton, besieged by lies, slanderous accusations, and treachery, is explored in this breathtakingly beautiful poem. In pursuit of purpose and change, the story takes readers on a journey through gloom and sorrow. This fantastic work is full of colorful and eerie imagery, layering metaphors that combine the otherworldly with the natural world. The language depicts a soul going through suffering and changing as a result of its own eerie encounters. A fave for me
Sharma  Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 7:30 AM
Thank you for reading with such sincerity and kindness, dear Sotto! So honoured to receive the fav as well ~ you really comprehended the metaphorical essence here brilliantly! And for that I'm grateful.. sending you light and best wishes ~ ✨✨🐚🐚💫💫
DiMino Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 5:26 AM
Great Poetry! You get a FAV From me! It is all our own doing. The only power evil has is that power we give it, the wickedness will are willing to entertain in our own hearts. The bones are alive and well, if we continue to allow their passing to be substance or our eternal existence. All will repeat over and over like an unsettling meal, until we learn to eat of higher wafer. Enjoyed this read very much. Inspired by your fine, deep, blessed work.
Sharma  Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 7:17 AM
Woah! That is really honouring, dear Joe! To get a fav! Really means the world ~ you're very right in saying that the evil only feeds on our light as long as we give it the power, it all depends on our will and resilience.. and the way we keep circling back, but the one realisation that bird strongest is that we are actually able to overcome more and beyond! Just if we reach that higher frequency, isn't it? I thoroughly enjoyed reading your feedback, made me think deep itself. Thank you so much for giving my words time and actually sitting with them! I appreciate you so much! Sending you starbeams and soothing sparkles 💫🧜‍♀️🐚🧜‍♀️💫
Empress Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 2:40 AM
“ in osteoporotic caves, like ticking grenades in the monet of time ” is very original and different dear Hiya! Youv captured the essence of the art and also given something worthy for the prompt! Pleasure reading ~ Sending you light always
Sharma  Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 7:13 AM
omg another comment ahhhhh so SWEET ~ it was a bit nerve-wrecking to write but I have it a try anyways lol, for the love of poetry! 🫠🩷😉 I'm so glad you liked that part! Loveeeee love ~ my poetic guardian angel 💞💜✨💫
Empress Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 2:39 AM
Aries eyes? That stood out for me! Hah! Well I dont have always good experience with some Aries eyes, they break my soul, leaving skeletons! A very familiar feeling crosses my bones as I read this very well articulated ekphrasis! I especially love “ some skeletons do not weep waning fossils ~ within fondescent tombs, rather, they metamorphose into a twilight “ and I must also highlight great use of the word sapiens and so many more! I am immersed in the darkness of kohl-kisses skies
Sharma  Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 7:10 AM
Ah yes, I've known such chaos, although aries eyes were a symbol of self-sabotage here, sigh! You really catch up on everything I bleed and also feel the very essence that ripples in my veins, my beautiful Ink 😢😭❤️‍🔥🌹❤️‍🩹 ~ thank you for blessing me with your presence, may the darkness of kohl-kissed skies always give way to light! Loveeee and light 😻😻 Huggssszzz ✨🧜‍♀️🧚‍♀️🐚🧚‍♀️🧜‍♀️✨
Buhagiar Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 11:03 PM
A dark tapestry of pain. Its lyrical in a sobering way. Great imagery. The poem explores suffering, hypocrisy, and spiritual corrosion, yet transforms pain into a kind of immortal artistry. Best for a win.
Sharma  Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 7:07 AM
Yes the spiritual corrosion! I'm glad that you caught up on the essence, dear Victor, thank you so much for describing my words with such a lovely feedback.. hope you've been doing well! Sending you starbeams and soothing sparkles ✨✨💫🧚‍♀️💜🌙
Buehler Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 5:23 PM
This awe-inspiring, intriguing ekphrastic poem employs stunning imagery in the interpretation of the artwork. Best of wishes for the contest. Hugs. :)
Sharma  Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 6:57 AM
Awwwn sweet Evelyn, your visit on my poems is always magical 😍😍 I'm so delighted to know that you enjoyed the imagery here and my interpretation for the artwork ~ it really caught my eye, so yea I gave it a try! Sending you mermaid light and fairy sparkless 😻🌹💞🧜‍♀️🧚‍♀️💫✨
Cunningham Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 10:36 AM
I admire works of art and it amazes me how you and a few others on here manage to get into the heart and soul of the painting. I wouldn't know where to start. Best of luck in the contest Hiya. Tom
Sharma  Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 6:54 AM
Yes, dear Tom, i absolutely resonate with what you've stated above artworks, this is just my second ekphrasis poems, first one was Ink Empress' contest . Firstly, I thought that it would be a lil difficult but then emotions just flowed! As only my heart and my soul know how to tame my quill ~ haha. Thank you for the beautiful praise, means a lot coming from an excellent poet, like yourself! Sending you starbeams and soothing light! ✨💫🌹🌙💜🌹
Crandall Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 7:49 AM
Wow, incredible ideas and images, great picture too - horror, frozen in eternity.
Sharma  Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 6:51 AM
Awwn thank you so much for being here and reading kindly, dear David! Yes, I love the picture as well, caught my eye instantly and I love that description, frozen in eternity, it absolutely is.. Wishing you a beautiful Thursday 💜✨💫🌙🧜‍♀️
Kendrick Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 7:27 AM
Without looking closely, I would have thought that would be a vulture tree, but upon closer observation I saw it is actually people on that tree. LOL..Creative way to go for the contest. Sara K.
Sharma  Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 6:45 AM
Awwwn LOL hahahaha 😂! Exactly! It really gives the illusion of birds or something like that sitting, but those are actually ghosts and souls ...or lost people. Spooky!!! 🫣🙀🙀 Quite eye-catching and I thought it would be perfect to combine with the poem. Thank you so much Sara, for being here! And for reading so kindly! Appreciate you deeply! Sending mermaid-light and starbeams 💫💫🧜‍♀️🧜‍♀️💞💞💜
Rodgers Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 7:25 AM
Dear Hiya, What a breathtaking, visceral descent into the shadows of the soul. What strikes me most is the fierce alchemy at the heart of your stanzas. A stunning defiance against a world that tries to reduce vulnerability to a carcass. When you speak of the skull of a hopeless sorceress shipwrecked in a deserted heart, lingering like a ticking grenade in the Monet of time, it feels as though you are mapping the very pain that meets immortal art. Strikingly transcendent, Hiya. Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Sharma  Avatar
August 6, 2026 at 6:29 AM
Dear Daniel, it really moves my heart to know that you completely understand the intent and the metaphorical essence behind this piece! It's always such an honour to recieve your eloquent feedbacks ~ they always encourage me and keep me motivated as a poet.. grateful that you took the time to really sit with this one and feel ever line! Thank you so much for your generosity and kindness! Sending you moonlight and star-scented best wishes 🌙💫✨🧜‍♀️🧜‍♀️
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