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Soul of Seaside Sepulchre

When the seaside sepulchre of a kingdom, without its queen, is smeared with screams of lighting, I wish to crackle these slivers of silver shakle, and devour that consoling taste of balsamic twilight, which drapes every ritual of woe with maleficent vows. I wonder, if the thievery of of my soul, will enhance the crawling of raven sun or, bestow power upon the baptised mannequin, by slaying those jealous lilies, floating in summery estuaries of my stolen destiny. As these sage flames fly across the chambers of my castle, petrifying those puerile promises of life, I seak to be an amaranth, rising beyond oak skies as I engulf those taunting meteors that enshroud my solitude and dethrone every essence of false light, that consumed those waltzing scents of my sangria spring. Has my heart become a fickle thorn, who will keep bleeding guidance in moonlight or shall this fortnight be traced by the last streak of treacherous bloodline? Perhaps, 'The Goddess of Thunder' is unfurling those flaming rose' maidens, who wish to splash ebons of roaring wreath, across the woeful vaults of my ribcage, which concealed their silence in sentinels of sacrifice. I don't assert the want of swathing myself in the perfumed petrichor of heinous healing, as I don't want to quench this rage that is carving a strife to refuse my surrender towards this succumbing darkness. " I wish to be the soul of a marionette's pearly pupa, satiated by fiery halo of chrysalis, and slowly weaving silken hymns of desperate hope, desiring to emerge from the emeralds, that betray every eye... "

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Date: 2/26/2024 8:20:00 AM
Hiya, this poem is incredible. I was pulled back to read it repeatedly, and each time this stanza caught me with its intensity these sage flames fly across the chambers of my castle, petrifying those puerile promises of life, I seak to be an amaranth I am now diving into your poetry collection for more! Thank you.
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Lacey Jones
Date: 2/26/2024 8:21:00 AM
Date: 2/13/2024 10:00:00 AM
An exhilarating read filled with imagery and emotion. Loved it!
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Date: 1/11/2024 6:23:00 AM
An unsurprisingly exceptional poem, Hiya. You create magic every time you write! Congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Date: 1/10/2024 9:38:00 PM
"Has my heart become a fickle thorn, who will keep bleeding guidance in moonlight or shall this fortnight be traced by the last streak of treacherous bloodline?" - As I had written in my comment once, your poems have beautiful flowery language and sentimentally spiritual depth. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/10/2024 10:55:00 AM
Hiya you are a brilliant poetess who has a unique fresh approach to everything you create! Congratulations on another win!
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Date: 1/2/2024 8:40:00 PM
Is this for a contest? Well, wow, I see a Winner here already, and should I be congratulating you in advance? So good, however let me wish you the best of luck. Happy New Year dear Hiya. I dearly wish you all the best for 2024, and may all your dreams come true. Hugs xx
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Date: 1/1/2024 8:58:00 AM
Dear Hiya, you deserve the manifold plaudits for this fantastic poem. I am profoundly impressed by your exceptional poetic prowess, which infusely decorates each of your written compositions. This specific poem offers a profound and extraordinary analysis of inner turmoil and the yearning for individual development. Your use of diction is exceptionally evocative, effectively portraying your emotions and personal struggles in a vivid manner, BOL with the contest, Splendid 2024
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Date: 12/31/2023 2:27:00 PM
You have such a beautiful way of expressing deep emotion, Hiya. My favorite line of the many that touched my heart is, 'waltzing scents of my sangria spring.' This is a fave. :)
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Date: 12/31/2023 12:45:00 PM
"from the emeralds, that betray every eye" wow that is deep- you write of transitioning, and the sage follows...in you- a pleasure to read! You are wise beyond your years.
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Date: 12/31/2023 11:15:00 AM
A sure winner here, Hiya. Needless to say, it is a Fave for these eyes whose was not betrayed, for they have found a better replacement to fulfill them to overflowing delight--I truly, thank YOU. Cheers, 2024, my friend. Aloha, William
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Date: 12/31/2023 6:50:00 AM
Deserving, as always, of all the accolades you receive, Hiya. I am impressed with your poetic prowess that adorns everything your write. --I seek to be an amaranth, rising beyond oak skies as I engulf those taunting meteors that enshroud my solitude and dethrone every essence---Perhaps, 'The Goddess of Thunder' is unfurling those flaming rose' maidens--A FAVE for the power of your vocabulary in this awesome write!
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Date: 12/30/2023 10:04:00 PM
darkness unfolded delicately - well expressed
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Date: 12/30/2023 7:04:00 PM
Your the poet of all poets holding the key to worlds beyond the self, where sacred reliance becomes the answer Hiya, Happy New Year to you and be well all year through, :)
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Date: 12/30/2023 4:59:00 PM
exquisite writing, Hiya. So many lines resonated with me but I especailly like 'desperate hope desiring to emerge from the emeralds that betray ever line. Have a great new years. hugs, Sara
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Date: 12/30/2023 2:08:00 PM
Like Tom, I liked the silken hymns line. Lovely writing. God bless you always, love, Gina
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Date: 12/30/2023 1:54:00 PM
You wish to be the soul of a marionette's pearly pupa? Ha! Bet that line's never been done before. I have no idea what it means but I think I like it. But my fave line is "slowly weaving silken hymns of desperate hope." Sublime
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Date: 12/30/2023 11:29:00 AM
Whoa!! I don't think I would want to be that chrysalis. I would want to be a yellow swallowtail butterfly if I was in the insect kingdom. This one reads like a good contender if it is for a contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 12/30/2023 10:48:00 AM
WoW! Well done my friend. This is such and emotional piece. Beautifully written and well described. Excellent for the contest. Good Luck. God Bless, JB
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Date: 12/30/2023 9:37:00 AM
Excellent poem for the contest dear Hiya.. The vivid imagery and intricate language, took me on a journey through the complexities of emotion and existential questioning. The seaside sepulchre becomes a symbolic stage for the poet's contemplation, where the absence of a queen is felt amid the screams of lightning... A bit like ink Empress not being around ,right? You have love and devotion for her.. The use of metaphors, such as "sage flames" and
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 12/30/2023 11:54:00 PM
Dear Silent One, thank you so much for your in-depth analysis of my poem and for commenting with such beautiful kindness, I'm grateful. Although, Ink is truly an Empress with her poetic Kingdom, the queen of metaphors and I truly adore her with respect, but, I want to confess that this poem isn't about her.. As this poem is all about the darkness I've experienced in life, how at times a soul wished for death instead of life and how I've dwelled in a depressive state.. I don't want even a bit of such dark emotions to even touch her aura.. She deserves everything best and magical as she has an empathetic and genuine heart.. Thank you so much, to you both, for your amazing support always ~
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Silent One
Date: 12/30/2023 9:38:00 AM
"flaming rose' maidens," adds depth to the narrative, creating defiant and longing emotions... Your poem explores the complexities of surrendering to darkness while simultaneously resisting it, creating emotions that invite reflection on the nature of hope, sacrifice, and the intricate dance between light and shadow.
Date: 12/30/2023 9:15:00 AM
This is beautiful, so captivating and encouraging, what a blessing to be able to enjoy your beautiful gift in writing: )
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 1/3/2024 10:43:00 PM
Awwn, thank you so much for reading this poem, I'm glad that you enjoyed this visit.. Your words of kindness truly warm my heart ~
Date: 12/30/2023 9:02:00 AM
Beautifully written. "Thievery of soul and stolen destiny" brought forth an. element danger in this poem of loss. It contained a formidable story.
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 1/3/2024 10:42:00 PM
Ahh, yes, I hold this poem very close to my heart, dear Hilda.. And to know that your empathetic heart felt those emotions which I tried to convey, that really makes me so full of gratitude.. Thank you so much for your kindness, sending love & light ~

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