John Freeman Poet Dodoitsu

Soul Mates

~His delicate heart fading  
          With red gray streaks, her hair moist
                    She kisses with withered lips
                              Her heart’s soul goodbye 

For and in honor of Francine Roberts
And contest: Red

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 22, 2011 at 11:49 AM Congratulations John on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Red". Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K. February 10, 2011 at 9:18 AM This definitely pulls at the heartstrings, Moses-- no wonder it won- congrats on your win with this very touching piece! --nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich February 5, 2011 at 10:03 AM wow,how did I miss ever seeing this one. What a touching and sad poem, john. Very well done. Congratulations.

Robert Pettit February 4, 2011 at 5:10 PM Congratulations on your win John. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming in this entry.

Joyce Johnson February 4, 2011 at 5:02 PM Congratulations on your big win John with this sentimental entry. Happy to share honors with you. Love, Joyce

Kory Calhoun February 4, 2011 at 2:49 PM Hi John - A pretty sentiment. Congratulations on your great WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC

Sierra Biersack February 4, 2011 at 2:36 PM Reallly good poem :)

Sara Kendrick February 4, 2011 at 12:59 PM Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest...Kind of sad ...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Your review was like a cool breeze on a summer day..Sara

Carrie Richards February 4, 2011 at 12:48 PM A tender story of love in just 4 small lines...well done, John!! Congratulations!

Kash Poet February 4, 2011 at 12:47 PM Congrats john on your big win in this contest of Francine!Enjoyed your poem--kashinath

James Fraser February 4, 2011 at 11:02 AM Many congrats John on your fine win in Francine's contest. Have a lovely weekend....:)

Sharon Ruebel February 4, 2011 at 10:11 AM Hello John, Congratulations on your win...This is such a deep and beautiful piece. So loving and gentle As Always, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire February 4, 2011 at 9:55 AM Gee, I'm sorry I missed this one earlier. Must have been busy judging my own contest. This is a very moving poem and I'm so glad to see you taking the top spot in the contest, John. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 4, 2011 at 8:04 AM Congrats Moses on your first place win in the RED contest with this exciting entry my friend.. so nice to share first place with one of the best poets on site luv.. enjoy ...

Tahera Mannan February 4, 2011 at 6:50 AM This had to win. It is beautiful.Many congratulations for this success.

Nette Onclaud February 4, 2011 at 1:30 AM toppers, john.. best cheers for the win! :) huggs, nette

Francine Roberts February 3, 2011 at 11:26 PM this was just beautiful, congrats on your first place win in my contest John

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet February 3, 2011 at 12:55 PM Terrific read.Thanks for the congrats on my win.I really liked this one the words say love without speaking.Good luck in the contest.~Teresa~

Nette Onclaud February 1, 2011 at 10:50 PM john, you mystify me! best luck in the contest! :) hugggs, nette

Tahera Mannan February 1, 2011 at 8:52 PM This is enchanting. All the best for the contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 1, 2011 at 7:56 PM Sweet depth of romance Moses my friend.. a beautiful Dodoitsu for the contest.. good luck with luv.. appreciate your encouraging words on my entry also my friend...

Dr.Ram Mehta February 1, 2011 at 6:46 PM Nice pen picture with good images, John. Good luck in the contest,