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Soul Mate

“This time I would catch that shooting star before its fiery demise!” I loudly proclaimed. Dispelling all doubt when it comes to wishes...and how a majority perish like dreams upon awakening (dawn sometimes not all that is cracked-up to be – forgetting light and dark having both their treasures and defeats) Like being alone and lonely are not necessarily mutual. Many of us continue to contrast evil and righteousness, using only eyes and feelings~shades and colors easiest to see and clarify – opting too readily for something we can taste, swirl in our mouths, like good and bad kisses. But...back to that star, as I held it in my eyes long after its parting – as I gave it gleam, long after its brightest moment – then gave it your name, realizing you a forever blazing part of me....

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Date: 6/18/2022 12:02:00 AM
"But...back to that star, as I held it in my eyes long after its parting – as I gave it gleam, long after its brightest moment – then gave it your name, realizing you a forever blazing part of me....' Beautiful conclusion to a great poem of love. "I gave it gleam" knowing it ever blazing part of me'. This mutual support to be in gleam makes life meaningful and it is when both become true soul mate to each other. Enjoyed the great depth of your beautiful relationship, Joe
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Joe Dimino
Date: 6/18/2022 6:28:00 AM
It is both Divine and human -- my wife and I are so attuned to Divine Love that we seldom can separate the two. Therefore, true love is always Divine. Blessings my friend.
Date: 6/9/2022 5:06:00 PM
loved it....
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/11/2022 8:38:00 AM
read John Donnes The Ecstasy....lots of good stuff to steal in there...remember the difference between a bad poet and a good one, a good one is partly a thief....in love and war, rules are fungible
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Joe Dimino
Date: 6/11/2022 8:32:00 AM
Without a doubt, we are imitating gods. Thank you, Ray; you made my day friend! Blessings.
Date: 6/3/2022 8:15:00 AM
Hi Prince! a most moving write! My favorite line begins...” but back to that star!” Very powerful line. May you, and your Princess have a day befitting royalty. Panagiota
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Joe Dimino
Date: 6/3/2022 11:11:00 AM
Hi Pangie; thank you. And a wonderful day to you and yours~blessings!
Date: 5/31/2022 5:28:00 AM
Great live poem, when ch Mrs DeMino must enjoy. But the aside, about dawn not all cracked up and said ... Puts lie to common knowledge. For thy wisdom, shalom shalom Farher-Brother-Rabbi
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/31/2022 3:04:00 PM
Thank you, Anil; of course here I speak of physical light, physical dawn – pure spiritual light cannot be seen with the physical eye, its vibration too high. One must use his spirit eye. I have seen such light, have been under a shower of it -- and recall how I kept thinking, how can anything be so intense, so powerful, so bright!~and yet not disintegrate me instantly? Something I will never forget.
Date: 5/30/2022 5:26:00 PM
Beautifully said my friend. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/31/2022 3:06:00 PM
Hi Judy. Thank you my friend. Have a beautiful day!
Date: 5/30/2022 2:43:00 PM
This love tale was beautifully told, Joe. The exquisite imagery left me breathless. Enjoy your week, Evelyn
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/31/2022 3:07:00 PM
Thank you, Judy; it was a joy to write. So pleased that others like it as well as I do.
Date: 5/30/2022 6:11:00 AM
Wow, I love this! Great ending too and a FAVE for me. Thanks for sharing :)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 5/31/2022 3:07:00 PM
You made my day! Thank you, Heidi!

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