Soul Gravity

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Written: November 15, 2023 For Line Gauthier Contest _________________________________________ finally reached your sensitive soul gravity pulled us down fate tore us apart we wrapped our love in foil to avert its spoil

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/17/2023 2:50:00 AM

Excellent rhyming, resonating poem. Love can be like saffron.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/16/2023 2:03:00 AM

A few words but so deep. Best for a win. Blessings.

Ink Empress

Date: 11/15/2023 10:52:00 PM

Oh this is so poignant and soulful, how you’ve expressed so much in few lines is beyond impressive, when fore tear two hearts apart, and love now is wrapped in foil, is just so heart wrenching to read. Very well delivered. Absolutely loved reading this one dear sotto, always an impeccable write from you

Bill Baker

Date: 11/15/2023 8:16:00 PM

Nice entry for the contest, my friend. Good luck! Bill

Paige Hind

Date: 11/15/2023 7:13:00 PM

A lot in a few words. Reads very beautifully...

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 11/15/2023 4:52:00 PM

Sotto, I really appreciate this one, easy to understand to me and the ones we talk the language of love. Awesome. And your voice reminds me Richard Burton. Beautiful.. Blessingsxxxx

Silent One

Date: 11/15/2023 3:07:00 PM

A tender poem Sotto, it may be short but it is full of emotions.. nicely created..