Soul

SOUL you and I we have a tie I want to be in the place your head lives I want to feel the surges of your heart to take your face cup it in my hands stare into your eyes and perhaps …cry together I want to touch your lips just a soft brush with mine then gauge the reaction and respond honestly I want to smell you your hair… your chest splay my hands over the core of you with perception I want you to love me © Kim van Breda—14 December 2015

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Date: 12/27/2015 8:24:00 AM
Very beautiful and emotional , u show ur desire in a magnificent, breath taking way so for that I salute you my dear...Merry Christmas for you and all of ur beloved one's as I wish u a happy new year...hugs / / :D dalia.
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Date: 12/21/2015 6:04:00 PM
Kim, this is sweet and pleasant desire. Taking it easy and seeing how it makes you feel. May you have a beautiful holiday and much success in the coming year. Best in all endeavors.
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Date: 12/14/2015 9:57:00 PM
dear kim, it seems you know desire well....as for me, I am addicted to the smell....the aroma of woman reaches the depths of my Soul....the collection of her curves awes to the point where my attention is stole....the taste of her lips makes me hunger for more....and the feel of her touch passionately affects me to my very core....nice and inspiring kim....;)
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 12/16/2015 9:38:00 AM
Thank you Eric... your comments are always so encouraging.. and .. 'poetic' ;) ~~X~~
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