Sorry, I'M Closed

You never had the time, so you would always window shop. You always came to window shop. Stores have the best things hanging in the windows, promoting itself with bargains and deals in order to attract any customer that passed by. One day, you finally came inside. You looked around and saw the different colors and fabrics that each article of clothing had to offer. The store began to consider you a regular and was happy to see that you returned. After inspecting and getting to know everything the store contained, You walked into my fitting room to see if anything could appeal to you. You slid on each piece seeing how it would fit or compliment you. Minutes passed and the curtain stayed closed.

 You threw everything into the return pile and walked out of the store. The clothing that laid there was stained. Your scent and the fingerprints you left behind would become apart of the clothing that sat inside. I wanted to put them on the sale rack but they ended up in storage. 

You were no longer a regular. Weeks went by. The store was empty. So it closed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/27/2017 11:49:00 AM
Kali, I really enjoyed your poem and look forward to many more, you are a great storyteller and welcome to Poetrysoup !
Login to Reply
Date: 12/26/2017 5:38:00 AM
Great first post Kali.. Welcome to poetry soup..
Login to Reply
Sargent Avatar
Kali Sargent
Date: 12/26/2017 8:10:00 AM
Thank you so much! The only problem was that the first part of the poem was left out: I am like a store. My words, emotions, complaints, are the clothing on the inside hanging on racks and laid out on display.
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter