Sorrows of Slummin'

While I was out’a slummin’
I heard the sirens hummin’
	hands restrained behind
	now in jail I find
I shoulda seen it comin’
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bueckert Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 8:19 AM
Ha, nice limerick Linda! Congrats :)
Fowler Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 10:29 AM
Belated thanks Hat, for the nice comment on this limerick! :)
Canerdy Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 11:28 AM
Good one, Linda! Janice
Fowler Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 11:43 AM
Many thanks to you Janice. :)
Wolf Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 7:30 PM
Cute limerick with a light touch. Two thumbs up, Linda! :)
Fowler Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 7:30 AM
Always smiles gw, always smiles. :) Thanks for stopping by! laf
Clarke Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 11:00 AM
Nice one Linda. Really funny. Hope it places high in the contest :-)
Fowler Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 11:14 AM
Thanks WJ. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 9:19 AM
Quite a funny limerick. Loved it.
Fowler Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 11:14 AM
Thank you dear Victor. :)
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