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Sorrows of Slummin'

While I was out’a slummin’ I heard the sirens hummin’ hands restrained behind now in jail I find I shoulda seen it comin’

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Hat Bueckert

Date: 2/8/2023 8:19:00 AM

Ha, nice limerick Linda! Congrats :)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/25/2023 10:29:00 AM

Belated thanks Hat, for the nice comment on this limerick! :)

Di11y Da11y

Date: 2/8/2023 3:35:00 AM

Funny :)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/8/2023 6:23:00 AM

Thank you! :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/3/2023 11:28:00 AM

Good one, Linda! Janice

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/3/2023 11:43:00 AM

Many thanks to you Janice. :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/31/2023 7:30:00 PM

Cute limerick with a light touch. Two thumbs up, Linda! :)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/1/2023 7:30:00 AM

Always smiles gw, always smiles. :) Thanks for stopping by! laf

W J Clarke

Date: 1/31/2023 11:00:00 AM

Nice one Linda. Really funny. Hope it places high in the contest :-)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/31/2023 11:14:00 AM

Thanks WJ. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/31/2023 9:19:00 AM

Quite a funny limerick. Loved it.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/31/2023 11:14:00 AM

Thank you dear Victor. :)