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Sorrow Five Lines

I am alone on a sea of sorrow No beacon of light from the shore Unable to see the face of tomorrow Your eyes tell me love is no more Broken pieces of life I cannot restore

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Robert Lindley

Date: 7/16/2015 7:17:00 PM

WHAT A FANTASTIC FIVE! Great write my friend. Areal joy to read! A7

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/1/2015 4:45:00 AM

Great poetry Barbara n awesome win! Big congrats!

Skat A

Date: 6/30/2015 10:52:00 PM

nice

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/30/2015 10:53:00 AM

I am delighted that you entered my contest. All the entries were uniquely written and of good quality. I read your wonderful work and found it to be superb. A very sad topic though. Congrats on your win …Sara

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 6/30/2015 10:06:00 PM

Thank you Sara, I enjoyed this contest..the poem is mostly poetic license although I think weve all had those moments...BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/29/2015 10:22:00 PM

this is indeed a great metaphorical. One of my favorites so far on the list. Congrats for the win.

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 6/30/2015 10:06:00 PM

thank you dear, appreciate your owrds so much. Barbara

Viv Wigley

Date: 6/28/2015 3:29:00 AM

Yes, I think we've all been adrift at one time or another. Lovely little piece, Barbara. #7. Viv x

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/24/2015 2:37:00 AM

Anyone who has suffered heartbreak can relate to this poignant piece, beautifully expressed Barbara. 7