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Sorcery Onstage

As a tiara of lights blushes on cheeks with rhythmic sorcery, I breathe in the fire under the open moonlight, and velvet curtains unfold on one evening’s tapestry… the heart pulses with a podium of tantric notes bound to release some lithe madness , as silhouettes appear like rugged capes grating the first tempo of Latin blues. Now, go! Cuddle it, taste it , snort it… whatever the spirit releases in a mix of bass, sax, and percussion; this rhapsody of notes devours my breasts slaying the hours to climb past reality… each tilted croon floods my being that I am gone somewhere, among the clouds of tribal rapture one with the universal float in a dance, in tears heating along crowded aisles while the neon bulbs onstage shuts off. 6/6/2015 Craig Cornish's Concert

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Date: 6/11/2015 4:02:00 PM
nice win Nette
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Date: 6/10/2015 11:20:00 PM
This is delicious, and a worthy winner. A lovely piece, very sensuous. Well done, Nette. Viv x
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Date: 6/10/2015 5:42:00 PM
You certainly know how to rock at a concert. Outstanding write and win Nette! Hugs
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Date: 6/10/2015 4:42:00 PM
Well done. I feel and hear it. CONGRATS on the win!
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Date: 6/10/2015 2:22:00 PM
congratulations Nette on your top tier first place for this successful concert poem.
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Date: 6/10/2015 2:12:00 PM
Awesome write, Nette! My heartfelt congratulations on your top of the podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/10/2015 1:36:00 PM
what a dramatic visual feast you conjured up for us Nette - can see why Craig loved this many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx 7
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Date: 6/10/2015 11:00:00 AM
Superb! Your words make us feel the excitement of a concert, the sounds, the feelings the music evokes.
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Date: 6/9/2015 2:36:00 PM
I love this one; I can see the visual, my soul hears the music and I'm giving it a "7".
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Date: 6/7/2015 5:51:00 PM
In awe... The first stanza has us drawing in breath, the second has us catching it! Magnificent write.
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Date: 6/7/2015 2:07:00 PM
What an awesome piece painted beautiful, I like how it flow. Excellent write.....A.M.
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Date: 6/6/2015 11:30:00 PM
Amazingly beautiful and lyrical Poem which unfolds the mysteries of Sorcery (Tona Tutka Hindi word) like a night full of charming secrets unfolding its hidden treasure one after another. Beautiful write dear friend and thank you so much for your kind words on my Charkha Poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 6/6/2015 1:51:00 PM
The thrill of a concert sizzles through your fascinating poem. I am thinking of Santana and his band. Awesome mood till the last line!
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Date: 6/6/2015 11:07:00 AM
music is so exciting Nette the gentle croon, the spine tingling chords and this poem does it justice hugs 7
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Date: 6/6/2015 10:13:00 AM
Like Olive's poetry, I so love yours as well. I love the way you craft them. Good luck in the contest Nette, hugs//James :) :)
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Date: 6/6/2015 8:07:00 AM
Nette, your poetry is always beautifully penned A 7 and thanks for visiting my footle poem
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Date: 6/6/2015 7:40:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Nette! - Good luck in the contest - I wish you a great weekend! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/6/2015 6:02:00 AM
The thrill of anticipation, the theatrical landscape, the rise of senses-- they are here, woman! As if you were suspended in a dream state. I am a captivated by your outstanding poem!
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