Soothsayer

sight... 
a prophet's mark unsheathed
radiant, quell the shadow's scream
her lips were never meant for me
in auguries 
... blood uncharted
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December 17, 2023 at 6:58 AM
Oh my, this is such an evocative and deep poem with poignant hues of unrequited love.. I absolutely love the title as well! Your words are concise and precise yet so reflective as they pull gloomy heartstrings.. A soul stirring piece.. "her lips were never meant for me in auguries" Beautifully done!
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December 17, 2023 at 7:16 AM
Thanks for your thoughts Hiya
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December 16, 2023 at 8:20 AM
perhaps the future held something far better than her lips. You've written fine lines to make a reader delve into the imagination. Well done, Clive.
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December 16, 2023 at 8:35 AM
Thank you Lin, and thanks for your time, much appreciated
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December 16, 2023 at 7:09 AM
A deep and heartfelt write this is. Soothsayer excellent title for the poem as it fits perfectly, and i felt this line “ her lips were never meant for me in auguries” i felt like it depicts pain of unrequited love in some ways, very well expressed and i had to look up auguries. Learned a new word now. Always good to learn new words. Pleasure reading this
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December 16, 2023 at 7:47 AM
Thanks for your kind words IE
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