- Soothing Breeze -

                               The kiss and warm embrace
                                         one single moan
                                   from the soothing breeze
                                         gets up playfully
                                        Waves of ecstasy 
                                      on tanned warm skin
                                      enjoying the moment
                                       of pure bliss and joy
                                          Curious butterfly
                                         brushes my cheek
                                    Brief rush of sweet feeling
                                          moment of silence
                                       which was truly divine

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Perry Campanella

Date: 7/29/2023 1:53:00 PM

Anne-Lise your words paint this photo you picked - I feel your emotion in that lovely imagery your words evoke - Thank You & Good Luck - stay safe too! Perry C.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/23/2023 4:43:00 PM

Lovely poetry Anne-Lise, “truly Devine” as was your “moment of silence”… Belle

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/23/2023 5:28:00 AM

So lovely:)

Leotis Hargrove

Date: 7/21/2023 9:11:00 PM

Anne-Lise. Thank you for this work of art! Thank you for blessing us with your gift. The line's that caught me "The kiss and warm embrace, one single moan." Keep up the great work! Good luck with the contest!

Valsa George

Date: 7/20/2023 8:42:00 PM

Beautiful and magical, both the poem and the image. I feel the soft touch of the same breeze that caressed and brushed against you. All the Best dear Anne....

Bill Baker

Date: 7/20/2023 3:57:00 PM

Your poem, "Soothing Breeze was indeed soothing, Anne-Lise. Hugs, Bill

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/20/2023 11:55:00 AM

Utterly charming and full of visceral delight Anne-Lise! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings and hugs for this beautiful moment of bliss and joy!