Get Your Premium Membership

Sonnet To the Creator

Oh Lord I hear the words inside my brain. The pounding, pounding, pounding won’t abstain, this favor that you granted unto me in meter, rhyme and endless poetry. I can not comprehend why you chose me to publicize your truth in poetry, but still I’ll try to make your wishes known in words and lines that I shall call my own. Oh Lord I pray my work will dignify your name, and Lord I promise I will try to never underestimate my skill, for Lord I understand that it’s your will. May everything that I shall ever write be worthy of your love, and bring delight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/23/2019 10:27:00 AM
Nice poem Susan, the lord with always give you more lines,rhyme's and ideas to remain progressive.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/19/2019 4:28:00 AM
Very impressive, Susan, a thoughtful wish that we as writers would serve his needs. Keep up the good work.
Login to Reply
Jeavons Avatar
Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/21/2019 8:33:00 PM
Thank you kindly Phil. I try. Blessings, Susan
Date: 1/18/2019 9:53:00 PM
This is DELIGHTFUL!
Login to Reply
Jeavons Avatar
Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/21/2019 8:33:00 PM
Thank you Caren. You are too kind. Blessings, Susan

Book: Shattered Sighs