Sonnet of the Stars

As long as stars have dotted nighttime skies
  Has man sought to unlock their mystery.
    We gaze upon their spark with marvelled eyes
As others have throughout all history. 

No other sights their beauty can discount
  In waves throughout the cosmic sea arrayed.
    They're splashed across the sky in rippled founts
That bathe the heavens in their pale cascade.

Each star a diamond sentinel of light
  That with us sojourns on their astral track.
    Their winking eyes watch over through the night.
I look to them as they look, staring back. 

     Though looking up I see them bright and clear,
     They won't see me for several hundred years.

9.17.18
Contest: Beautiful Mystery

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/29/2018 3:39:00 AM
beautifully descriptive sonnet Jesse i especailly love the opening stanza:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/28/2018 11:59:00 AM
Well penned, Jesse. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 9/27/2018 10:54:00 PM
This is mesmerizing, and one word doesn't change the fact that your thoughts are soaring. (Just being honest) They are touching all those Stars!! Poetry isn't perfect, it's emotions, beauty- so many moments caressing the page. Congratulations, on this win. Your words Shine!! Truly!! :) Brandy
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Date: 9/27/2018 6:44:00 AM
A favorite genre and subject of mine, Jesse, and you've done our heavenly candles such exquisite justice with this wonderful write! Just love this, my friend - congratulations! :-)
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Date: 9/26/2018 3:09:00 PM
Stars...a beautiful mystery for sure, Jesse, and one of my favorite subjects to think about. So much said in your last two lines that present the vastness of space by the many light years their glow takes to reach us here on earth. Congratulations on your nice win. Sandra
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Date: 9/26/2018 1:54:00 PM
Congrats!!! my friend on your fine win, with this beautiful sonnet...like John said a rising star you are...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 9/26/2018 11:52:00 AM
This is a great sonnet Jesse, I told you you are a rising star, and here you are again, well done, if not for the imperfect rhyme in the final couplet this would have placed higher!
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/26/2018 12:13:00 PM
Fair enough. Thanks for the placement and also for sharing your reasoning.
Date: 9/18/2018 1:43:00 AM
an awesome sonnet, Jesse. You've described the nighttime sky very beautifully.
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