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Sonnet Iii : the First Attempt

I often describe your beauty and charm but never the way I feel about you. And now I ponder what gracious and harm does this angel have and how much I knew. You tend to bring the best in everything especially to me who laughs scarcely. Takes my humor in skies of high jeering. Petty it be but I find it dearly. I pray to the great and wish to be signed, to how I should feel 'bout this art of his. For after hardships and sadness, I'm bind. Yet your sparkling eyes gives me constant bliss. A Goddess's face you do resemble and the smile that shall make mountains tremble.

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Date: 3/23/2016 9:55:00 PM
Jim, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/16/2016 5:47:00 PM
Jim, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT**
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Date: 1/4/2012 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Jim. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/12/2011 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jim. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2011 6:32:00 AM
Hi Jim, A great vers to a lovely lady, I enjoyed is very much.
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