Sonnet 18 Reversed

Shall I compare thee to my Adelaide?
Thou art less lovely and less temperate.
Rough winds shake you, my bony lady May,
Adelaide’s lease hath all a better date. 

Sometimes too hot your eye of hell shines,
And often your ugly complexion dimmed;
And every fair from fair always declines,
By chance, or nature's changing course untrimmed. 

But her eternal summer shall not fade
Nor lose possession of that fair her ow'st;
Nor shall death brag her wand'rest in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time her grow'st,

So long as you can breathe or you can see, 
So long lives thou, and I will not love thee.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 7:52 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 7, 2016 at 2:07 PM
Ruby, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Chappell Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 7:51 AM
very nice
Face Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 1:27 PM
hi ruby ;) i hope this isn't about HIM ;DDDD i'm being creepy RUBYMON should die. <3
Brown Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 6:01 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Ruby. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
Lin Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 6:32 PM
I think mine was better! xoxo Jeremy Lin
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March 6, 2012 at 3:25 AM
Lovely written Ruby, well done. - oxox Anne-Lise
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