Sonic Boom

I've seen you across the room the feelings hit me like a sonic boom I tried to stay away, it was no use The feelings h it me like a sonic boom I tried to be your friend I tried to gain your trust, but The feelings hit me like a sonic boom It hurts to know what you're going through It hurts to know that he betrayed you The feelings hit me like a sonic boom Do you know how hard it is not to kiss you? Do you know how much I miss you? But you don't feel the sonic boom You never did, did you?

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/23/2016 10:32:00 PM

Dylan, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 6/17/2016 1:14:00 PM

OMG... I imagine you writing the first thing you felt or glanced... wow...wish i had your flourishing talent. Skat