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Song of Thunder

sing to me tonight, lush song of thunder layered darkness soothing stark desert grief lift my wounded eyes, save me with wonder kisses of rain, lend me sorrow's relief sing to me, til I see, lightning's belief 8/13/19

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Date: 9/28/2019 1:16:00 PM
Powerful! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/21/2019 3:19:00 PM
I experienced a storm around me Michelle, I heard the thunder, felt the rain and anticipated the lightening - a terrific poem - good luck in the contest. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/17/2019 4:17:00 PM
An amazing write!
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Date: 8/13/2019 8:33:00 PM
Lovely poem, Michelle.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/15/2019 4:57:00 PM
Much appreciated, Line.
Date: 8/13/2019 6:23:00 PM
A beauty for the contest, Michelle. I can feel the rain upon my face. :) gw
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/15/2019 4:57:00 PM
So glad you like it, thank you, gw!
Date: 8/13/2019 6:09:00 PM
great use of metaphor, it brought that storm to life nicely....nicely penned poem! Good luck in the contest~ hugs :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/15/2019 4:56:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Sandra.
Date: 8/13/2019 5:02:00 PM
Beautifully rendered with words that delight the eye and touch the heart. Gl in the contest dear Michelle.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/15/2019 4:56:00 PM
Thank you, Pixie Dust-

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