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Song of the Soup

atop the mountain lifted up with kind comments your wishes unfold

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Janice Herzog

Date: 7/8/2009 11:27:00 AM

Dear James: Short, but way too sweet. Thanks for reading my poem, I'm so very glad that you liked it. Love, Janice Herzog xoxo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/6/2009 9:43:00 AM

I like this one because this is how everyone here seems to make everyone else feel. Sara

Christopher Higgins

Date: 7/6/2009 5:34:00 AM

Excellently said Jim.

Brian Strand

Date: 7/5/2009 11:46:00 PM

A good feeling to have Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Farah Chamma

Date: 7/5/2009 10:32:00 PM

Ah what a great senryu! Sweet and beautiful Always, Farah

John Freeman

Date: 7/5/2009 8:10:00 PM

Great thought,JM, on the poem, great prayer,aimed toward heaven, great prayer, Love to ye, jm

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/5/2009 3:13:00 PM

Those comments certainly can put us on top of the world. Awesome senryu, James! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/5/2009 2:04:00 PM

This poem sings to the soup....music to our ears...and should forever remain a classic !! Lovely lovely !!! ~ Love, Carrie

Heidie Buys

Date: 7/5/2009 1:42:00 PM

A great tribute and so truly spoken. Good job. regards Heidie

P Sheart

Date: 7/5/2009 12:22:00 PM

Hi Jim Ah what a breathtaking view you have upon that mountain top! I can feel all those wishes unfolding....What a beautiful heart, perspective you have. It makes my heart sing! Thanks so much for sharing this with us I appreciate it! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Sean Kelly

Date: 7/5/2009 11:13:00 AM

Got it in one , James or should that be 5~7~5 ....... Well captured ,in Senryu form ....

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/5/2009 9:31:00 AM

you deserve nothing less than kind comments-kind comments for a kind man and a poet of class,a friend too--charma

Diane Christian

Date: 7/5/2009 8:18:00 AM

aww so beautiful written, what a song this is, music to your many friends ears, God bless you from diane