Chris Hagy Poet Quatrain

Song of Spring

Breath of Spring fill my lungs
Light of Earth fill the sky
Joyous Song fill my tongue
Wondrous Beauty fill my eye

Sound of Spirit fill my ears
Peace of Mind fill the land
Happiness only fill my tears
Nature’s Riches fill every hand

Beautiful Day fill my mind
Nature’s Aroma fill the earth
Beautiful Memories fill my time
Power of Spirit fill our worth

Sweet Renewal fill this season
Unified Harmony fill mankind
Let Wisdom fill our every reason
Until Love fills us all inside

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James Inman April 4, 2020 at 12:56 PM Quite a lovely quatrain. The repeating word binds the piece and helps with the flow. Chris Hagy April 6, 2020 at 8:26 AM Thank you so much James ! :)...you and everyone else have been such a wonderful inspiration to me! C.H.

Lisa Ricci May 23, 2017 at 6:42 AM Good Morning Chris. Poetry to me is all about heart soul and expression not to mention emotion. This entry has it all. This is one of those entries that should be read out loud slowly with emphasis and pauses. Honestly. All is well within your entry in its entirety. Have a wonderful morning and day. Chris Hagy May 23, 2017 at 7:11 PM Thanks so much Lisa! :)...I appreciate your time and lovely, warm comments :) I have never really used this rhyme pattern, but that is just how this one came to me. I must be getting inspiration from all the great writers here! :) Happy spring :)

Richard Lamoureux April 8, 2017 at 7:59 AM Beautifully expressed. Chris Hagy April 8, 2017 at 7:37 PM Thanks so much for stopping by Richard and for the kind words...happy spring:)

Barry Stebbings April 5, 2017 at 3:22 PM Really lovely Spring poem, Chris, has a lyrical quality. // Barry Chris Hagy April 5, 2017 at 8:12 PM Thanks for your visit and kind words Barry...I do write songs as well and play a little guitar, so nice to know one art reflects the other:)

Paul Callus April 3, 2017 at 4:37 PM I am sure spring will not let you down, Chris! It has so much to offer, as your lovely poem tends to prove. #7 ~ Regards // paul Chris Hagy April 5, 2017 at 8:10 PM Thanks for visiting Paul:) Hope spring is lovely for you in Malta...it's taking it's sweet time here in Michigan!

Anne-Marie Coreggia April 2, 2017 at 8:42 PM Chris, your beautiful poem is radiating with music and light :) Amitiés Chris Hagy April 5, 2017 at 8:07 PM Thanks so much for visiting Anne and for your lovely comment:) have great day;)

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2017 at 8:41 PM Yes, you ARE a nature boy!! I bet you would love Utah where I reside. I have lots of beauty all around me. MOuntains to my east and lake to the west and trees everywhere! Good poem. Chris Hagy April 5, 2017 at 8:01 PM I'm sure I would love Utah, it sounds lovely. Thanks for checking this one out Andrea, sorry I don't get that much time here on soup, but it is really nice to share this art with others who appreciate it:)

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2017 at 8:40 PM Hey Chris, I am a bit worldy and don't get out much, so I'd pick door one. Exotic ! I also long for more time with family, my sisters I never see, so door 2 is my second. I already get lots of solitude and I love it, so I already have my door three! thanks for asking. right now I am in a rush but will see this one poem of yours. Chris Hagy April 5, 2017 at 7:58 PM How insightful, thanks for answering:) How nice to have sisters...sorry you don't see them as much as you'd like to.

Lynn Marie April 2, 2017 at 8:00 PM Oh this is beautiful Chris :-) The wonder of possibility that springtime brings is felt in each word of your uplifting poem. What a lovely way to usher in the season. thank you for the "Song" enjoy a happy week:-) lynnxxx Chris Hagy April 5, 2017 at 7:51 PM Thanks for listening to my "song" Lynn. Always appreciate your kind words and your visits:)