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Song of Passions

My darling, your smile Memories revive Blushing eventide Where emotions pry Rekindling our vibes On marigold skies As bashful moon vies Twinkle in your eyes Yearning earnestly Missives of feelings Invoking in dreams Rise of new morning As rays of sun blue Sparkle drops of dew When you say it's true The night had no clue That song of the dawn Was crooning for you, My dear, how you knew The dream is so true And song of the dawn Is just me and you When passions I woo So fervently bloom Euphoric longings Singing hearts’ lyrics Strumming to music Of doting heartbeats When so far you are Yet, so close you feel April 13, 2021 Anacreontic verse poetry contest Sponsor: Silent One Five syllables per line (howmanysyllables.com) Anacreontic verse is an Ancient Greek lyrical form consisting of 20 to 30 line poems with three to five syllables per line.

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Valsa George

Date: 6/19/2022 6:47:00 AM

Within the strict confines of just five syllables per line, you have encapsulated the whole lore of romantic love. Great Vijay!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/1/2021 10:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely story/write. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/31/2021 6:09:00 AM

Love the surprise in imaginative color pops …marigold skies, blue sun! Congratulations, avijay!

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/29/2021 2:57:00 PM

Hi Vijay, I'm just coming back to congratulate you on a well-deserved win. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/29/2021 11:56:00 AM

How vivid and passionate, congratulations on your win in the contest!

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/29/2021 10:50:00 AM

Congratulations for your win Vijay :)

Silent One

Date: 7/29/2021 6:53:00 AM

Sorry, I've not been around.. Not much free time at the moment, and that means not enough time for Poetry Soup... Thank you for writing for my contest and apologies it took so long to judge.. Congratulations on your placement...

Funom Makama

Date: 4/27/2021 7:35:00 PM

Beautifully written with so much grace. Your lines are thick with craft and fascination. Great work.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/28/2021 4:56:00 AM

Thank you Funom--much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/24/2021 2:45:00 PM

This poem is a great example of how to create a beautiful poem from this brief form Vijay Just amazing! I love your entry. Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/25/2021 5:25:00 AM

Thank you Connie--much appreciate.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/20/2021 4:53:00 AM

Lovely entry for the contest dear Vijay - i'm sure Silent One will indeed like it. good luck Vijay. hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/22/2021 4:55:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2021 10:27:00 AM

wonderful Anacreontic verse. I am glad S.O. introduced us to this form. It's so elegant!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/18/2021 1:23:00 PM

Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Vijay Galia

Date: 4/13/2021 10:31:00 PM

What a nice piece of work Vijayji Absolutely perfect

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/14/2021 4:44:00 AM

Thank you Vijay--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/13/2021 5:18:00 PM

"When so far you are- Yet, so close you feel" Such a thought wraps gently around the heart. This is beautiful, romantic and filled with the right amount of passion. I am in complete awe. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/14/2021 4:43:00 AM

Thank you my friend for your visit and wonderful comments. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Brandy, Many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/13/2021 2:56:00 PM

This is so beautiful. So nice to read this today. I love it. Well done Vijay! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/13/2021 3:18:00 PM

Always a pleasure when you visit Heidi. Much appreciate your kind thoughts. Many many thanks.

Sandra Adams

Date: 4/13/2021 2:42:00 PM

where there is love in the heart love will always surface through thoughts... beautiful write, i was just reading the contest description before i decided to read some poetry... i am sure silent one will adore this as do i... hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/13/2021 3:17:00 PM

Glad to see you back Sandy. Much appreciate your kind thoughts. Many thanks.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/13/2021 2:16:00 PM

An apt description of euphoric longings, romantic emotions abound and so smooth in its composition. Way to go. I think it is great.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/13/2021 3:16:00 PM

Thank you Victor. Much appreciate your kind feedback.

Judy Ball

Date: 4/13/2021 12:33:00 PM

No matter how far the miles are between us those we love are kept near us in our hearts. Well done Vijay. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/13/2021 12:46:00 PM

So true and well said, Judy. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/13/2021 9:05:00 AM

Sometimes the distance makes the heart grow fonder, and it brings out the poet in us, Well written Vijay, as always a beautiful contender for the contest, gl .:)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/13/2021 12:44:00 PM

Thank you Vienna for your kind thoughts. Much appreciate, as always.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/13/2021 8:47:00 AM

Full of passion and romance Vijay, a brilliant write.. Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/13/2021 12:43:00 PM

Much appreciate Tom. Many thanks for your visit and kind remarks.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/13/2021 8:31:00 AM

A cataract of passions that inundate the heart and soul with sweet memories expressed in Anacreontic verses. Excellent work that would certainly have been applauded by my ancestors, dearest friend, Vijay! Blessings!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/13/2021 12:42:00 PM

So much your ancestors offered to the world-their contributions resonate in works of art, literature, science... Much appreciate your feedback my friend. Many thanks for your visit and comments.

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/13/2021 7:09:00 AM

Your passions overflow in your most interesting composition with this form Vijay and you have stayed very true to your style at the same time. Well done !!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/13/2021 12:39:00 PM

So nice to hear that Mike. Happy to see your kind feedback--much appreciate--many thanks.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/13/2021 7:07:00 AM

WoW! Vijay, You composed such a well-written entry for the contest. I found it to be poetic and romantic. You rose to the occasion and met the challenge; you wrote an excellent write. It such a beautiful song. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/13/2021 12:38:00 PM

So glad you stopped by with your wonderful feedback my friend. Always a delight when you visit. Much appreciate--many thanks, Alexis.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 4/13/2021 6:55:00 AM

You have just made a hit by composing such a wonderful song! The flow of the feel runs before the words! Great interpretation, dear Vijay! What a wonderful craft of verse! You have highlighted the beauty of Love.. wishing you the highest of well deserved placement.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/13/2021 12:37:00 PM

Delighted I am to read your kind remarks, Besma. You always spread cheer on Poetry Soup. Many thanks for your visit and comments. Much appreciate, as always. Regards.