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Song of My Heart

paint life with flowing words splashing colours from sky wind, ocean, mountains ~ sonata fills air May 13,2013 Inspired by "Song Of My Heart" Poetry Contest Sponsor: JCB Brul Syllables (2-4-6-8-2) checked by HMS.com FIRST PLACE

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Date: 6/13/2023 11:40:00 AM
Mala, this is so very lovely. Full of the charm of life captured in life's vibrant colors with marvelous word usage - "splashing!" Every line fits together like pieces of a puzzle in a memorable "sonata!" Love the blending of art and music. Congratulations, dear friend, on your win! So well deserved. Blessings and hugs.
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Date: 6/13/2023 2:05:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely poem in the contest "Song of my heart", Mala :) - hugs
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Date: 5/18/2023 11:05:00 AM
Simply beautiful… Pangie
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/18/2023 7:15:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Friend. You make my day!
Date: 5/14/2023 5:44:00 AM
Lovely thoughts, vision. Beautiful. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/14/2023 5:55:00 AM
Thanks, Gina. Truly appreciate your comment.
Date: 5/14/2023 4:37:00 AM
Beautifully written; your imagery is superb. Enjoyed it. Best of luck in the contest!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/14/2023 4:52:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dear Poet. Your appreciation inspires me.
Date: 5/13/2023 11:13:00 PM
This is a sweet, and wonderful cinquain Mala. Good luck in the contest, it looks like another winner to me <3
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/14/2023 4:51:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dear Poet. Your appreciation is so precious to me!

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