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Song of Love

Trees
 sway
 gently
 in the wind
 as twilight descends,
 marmalade hues imbue the sky
 and as the golden orb dips below the horizon
 Luna rises to a twinkle of stars, and a song of love drifts on the moonbeams
                                -
 1-5-19
 Writing Challenge Fibonacci Contest
 Sponsor: Dear Heart
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Copyright © Joseph May | Year Posted 2019

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Robert A. Dufresne Date: 1/15/2019 6:45:00 PM Very well done, inspiring, imaginative poem, Joseph. Muse inducive. Congratulations to you ! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/13/2019 8:18:00 AM - Congratulations on your great 1 place in the contest, Andrea :) - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 1/12/2019 5:16:00 PM Beautiful in every way, and so deserving of this win. Congratulations Joseph. :) Brandy Login to Reply

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 1/12/2019 4:39:00 PM Lovely write, Joseph, and a worthy winner ... and my favorite muse! (The moon) Blessings and congrats with this wonderful chart-topper! :-) Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 1/12/2019 1:35:00 PM Lovely choices of imagery, Joseph. Bravo on your top win. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 1/12/2019 1:22:00 PM Joseph, congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing Fibonacci~ Login to Reply Joseph May Date: 1/12/2019 2:59:00 PM Thank you so much for my placement Dear Heart

Alexis Y. Date: 1/12/2019 1:18:00 PM Hi Joseph, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your top win:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 1/12/2019 12:14:00 PM Beautiful imagery and perfect verse, Joseph.Congratulations on your win..Hugs Eve~`* Login to Reply

Ann Gilmour Date: 1/12/2019 11:55:00 AM Aww this is simply gorgeous... Many congrats on your top placement. A fav for me! Kindest regards Ann x Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/12/2019 11:40:00 AM What a lovely description of the end of day, Joseph. Love the line about Luna rising to a twinkle of stars. Sooo well done! Congratulations on your first-place win in Dear Heart's contest. Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply

CayCay Jennings Date: 1/6/2019 4:30:00 PM Beautiful with a feeling of being whispered in wisdom's voice. I want to go check out what Dear Heart said about a line that wraps for I will probably have to deal with that, too. It may be okay, I just don't remember and I seem to be working out my memory issues in this comment box, sorry! Again, beautiful. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply

Arthur Vaso Date: 1/6/2019 3:21:00 AM Very nice Joseph. Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 1/5/2019 10:07:00 PM When the earth is still, all but the tender melody of the wind tangling through leaves upon a tree. It is peaceful indeed. Your images are beautiful. I am there in the moment. :) Brandy Login to Reply

John Hamilton Date: 1/5/2019 7:01:00 PM Beautiful work with this one Joseph, felt like I was there! Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 1/5/2019 6:54:00 PM Your imagery is beautiful, Joseph. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 1/5/2019 5:43:00 PM Hi Joseph, You penned a lovely symphony with words. I looks beautiful. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-)Alexis Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/5/2019 5:19:00 PM Such lovely write--fit for a song of love! Login to Reply