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Song of Love

Trees sway gently in the wind as twilight descends, marmalade hues imbue the sky and as the golden orb dips below the horizon Luna rises to a twinkle of stars, and a song of love drifts on the moonbeams - 1-5-19 Writing Challenge Fibonacci Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart Used howmanysyllables.com

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/15/2019 6:45:00 PM

Very well done, inspiring, imaginative poem, Joseph. Muse inducive. Congratulations to you !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/13/2019 8:18:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great 1 place in the contest, Andrea :) - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/12/2019 5:16:00 PM

Beautiful in every way, and so deserving of this win. Congratulations Joseph. :) Brandy

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/12/2019 4:39:00 PM

Lovely write, Joseph, and a worthy winner ... and my favorite muse! (The moon) Blessings and congrats with this wonderful chart-topper! :-)

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/12/2019 1:35:00 PM

Lovely choices of imagery, Joseph. Bravo on your top win.

Constance La France

Date: 1/12/2019 1:22:00 PM

Joseph, congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing Fibonacci~

Joseph May
Date: 1/12/2019 2:59:00 PM

Thank you so much for my placement Dear Heart

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/12/2019 1:18:00 PM

Hi Joseph, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your top win:-) Alexis

Eve Roper

Date: 1/12/2019 12:14:00 PM

Beautiful imagery and perfect verse, Joseph.Congratulations on your win..Hugs Eve~`*

Ann Gilmour

Date: 1/12/2019 11:55:00 AM

Aww this is simply gorgeous... Many congrats on your top placement. A fav for me! Kindest regards Ann x

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/12/2019 11:40:00 AM

What a lovely description of the end of day, Joseph. Love the line about Luna rising to a twinkle of stars. Sooo well done! Congratulations on your first-place win in Dear Heart's contest. Hugs, Carolyn

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/6/2019 4:30:00 PM

Beautiful with a feeling of being whispered in wisdom's voice. I want to go check out what Dear Heart said about a line that wraps for I will probably have to deal with that, too. It may be okay, I just don't remember and I seem to be working out my memory issues in this comment box, sorry! Again, beautiful. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/6/2019 3:21:00 AM

Very nice Joseph.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/5/2019 10:07:00 PM

When the earth is still, all but the tender melody of the wind tangling through leaves upon a tree. It is peaceful indeed. Your images are beautiful. I am there in the moment. :) Brandy