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Song of a Traveling Man

I flop at truck stops hid by other sleeping truckers. I like the loneliness. Amarillo, Detroit, Tacoma, Richmond, places packed and stacked with the bad and the good. I scoot by paying no heed, to features, just forms, how bodies once glimpsed sometimes return inside of me. Cities of light, death-heads hidden no one is looking. I’m not looking either — just driving through, hauling and honking. No one looking. Launderettes and liquor stores; five finger fandangos in the back, chicken wings and Jack D. Atlantic City, Apalachicola, soaking in the slipstream while America looks somewhere else. What are you watching America? Sometimes I think only the coyotes are paying attention. Roads thread through my fingers. The Great Lakes shimmer, Rockies rear-up and ripple. Moving along not looking, just driving. Old men on benches stare as I hammer on by, and blare, as if I were an 18-wheeled rolling exhibit of America itself.

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Date: 7/24/2019 6:15:00 PM
When I was a kid my parents owned a truck stop. I enjoyed the atmosphere and the truckers that dropped by for diesel, a good meal and some conversation. We were open 24/7 and we had our regulars.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 7/24/2019 6:31:00 PM
Thanks Richard, I have never driven an 18 wheeler. In fact if you ask my wife, I should not be allowed to drive a four wheeler. Sounds like you had an interesting childhood. A truck stop is a great place to meet characters. Slainte!
Date: 7/24/2019 3:18:00 PM
You captured the images and tone nicely........of a truckers life...what a great word to include" Apalachicola,' Thanks for visiting. SuZ
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Eric Ashford
Date: 7/24/2019 3:52:00 PM
Thanks Suz, don't you love that name! Bless
Date: 7/24/2019 10:41:00 AM
Captivating piece! Wonderful and original, and steeped in "je ne sais quoi". xomo
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Eric Ashford
Date: 7/24/2019 12:47:00 PM
Thanks Maureen! I must admit that I have only lived in America for 13 years, so it is cheeky of me to try Americana. So glad it worked for you.

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