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August- 20- 2025

Marathon Mile. 9. Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Mark Toney


 

When sleep deserted me,
      I crawled out of my bed unseen
to delve into the crevices of the dark
with the curiosity of an explorer
    and the near comatose of a somnambulist.
I walked up and down the steep slopes of the night,
    like a night watchman, without a lantern in hand.

When my legs grew weary
I sat on a rock covered with moss and lichen.

Looking into the dark pockets of the night,
  I thought of human mind, a deep gorge,
      with many an uninhabitable corner
             where serpent desires lie coiled
 scorpions crawl with toxic pincers
     and predators roam to prey upon helpless victims

The mystery of the night absorbed me
    her muffled sounds, her dark beauty
her elusive charm, like thick night fog,
 percolated deep into my consciousness
     and I floundered in a fathomless sea,
        swirling in her eddies and currents.
      

      It whisked me away to lands far…far!
      
But on being washed ashore,
   I was in a creative delirium

 I am now in 'No Man’s Land'
      where everything is in a coma of stillness
 where no light glimmers, no door ajar and no one in sight!	

Here the poet in me breaks open,
      the somnambulistic comatose
and down way flow my thoughts in indelible ink.

Like a night bird roosting on a tree,  
     I sing of my heart aches, of my yearnings and longings.

In the barely audible whispers of the night,
     my song reverberates in the eyeless abyss down,
         and the dark desolate valleys below.

People say, ghosts walk the earth at night.
        Oh!  I am not scared!
   I am not eager for the dawn to break,
        nor want to put my pen down!


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Date: 8/21/2025 1:56:00 AM
A lovely poem, dear Valsa. I've written about ghosts but don't really believe in them. As for lack of sleep, I know what it means. Summer deprives me of rest. Blessings.
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Date: 8/20/2025 11:19:00 PM
I love the way you can embrace whatever situation you find yourself in, Valsa. Your poetry gives hope of a life living in the present. You didn't want the night to end or have to put down your pen. I relate to that feeling, my sweet and dear friend. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 8/20/2025 5:05:00 PM
your poem was a magnificent blend of haunting images with subtle hope for one's muse. Wasn't expecting the last couple of lines. Truly a winner for the contest! You're an amazing poet! Sara
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Date: 8/20/2025 11:25:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Song of a Night Bird" write. "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away..........
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Date: 8/20/2025 11:10:00 AM
This poem beautifully captures how the sleepless mind becomes both a haunted landscape and a womb of creativity. It thrives in the quiet hour when ordinary constraints fall away, and pure thought—or art—emerges. The progression from crawling through darkness to owning that space, pen in hand, is profoundly evocative and resonant. It’s both a homage to the midnight muse and a brave confrontation of inner shadows.
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Date: 8/20/2025 10:07:00 AM
"down way flow my thoughts in indelible ink. Like a night bird roosting on a tree, I sing of my heart aches, of my yearnings and longings." -- Wow! Beautiful. "Oh! I am not scared! I am not eager for the dawn to break, nor want to put my pen down!" -- Brave poet, love it!
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Date: 8/20/2025 8:06:00 AM
You show great imagination in your words. Dreams can be the high point of the day when they cause us to take an exciting journey.
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