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Song For My Love, My Sweet

"A woodland path in the dappled sun, hushed and quiet "

At last you’ve come for me, my love, my sweet! You’ve come through tranquil woodland, with the breeze, along that path where once we used to meet and with the sunlight streaming through the trees! With passion in your eyes and wings for feet, you’ve come for me, and all my anguish flees. You are so near, I hear your wild heart beat. You’ve come for me, my own wild heart to seize. Alas! The woods have vanished with the gleam of my waking dawn. It was but a dream.
Written June 9, 2011 by Andrea Dietrich Inspired by the Contest "A Woodland Path" sponsored by Constance la France ~ A Rambling Poet ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/4/2017 9:41:00 PM
This is beautiful Andrea.. A7... and a fave
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Date: 2/7/2015 7:36:00 PM
I love this one!
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Date: 9/24/2012 4:50:00 PM
Girl you sure know how to dream! Wonderful write! Hugs
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Date: 12/15/2011 2:52:00 PM
I don't remember this one, so maybe I didn't see this beauty somehow. Enjoyed reading it very much : )
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Date: 12/14/2011 11:32:00 PM
Andrea, I have to look this form up to have any knowledge to make a comment. I noticed your last comment was made 6 months ago. No one knows you now as this Poem goes. Is it lost in time; not to me. I will read your past, present and future Poetry, More than once A Fledging Poet kenny
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Date: 6/15/2011 5:37:00 PM
Beautiful, romantic dream you created here, my dear Andrea! Too bad it goes...poof!!! in the morning :( Love, iolanda
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Date: 6/14/2011 4:13:00 PM
And this poem is light on it's feet as well. You are so confident in so many forms. I envy your remarkable range. Love, Gerard
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Date: 6/14/2011 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this great poem, Andrea. Mom used to toss out old toys (and trolls) while I was at school. Starshine undoubtedly found his fate in the dumpster. Love, carolyn
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Date: 6/14/2011 1:57:00 AM
It must have been an awesome dream. Many congrats hun for this win.
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Date: 6/13/2011 1:15:00 PM
A mellow write Andrea, enjoyed the tone you have crafted into this write..
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Date: 6/13/2011 12:58:00 PM
Wow!! My turn to say "Jungle Love". Why spoil an awesome poem by waking up? Damn and double damn!! Congratulations on your placement. Nice work, Andrea. :))
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Date: 6/13/2011 12:49:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea, on your win with this lovely write~ Caryl
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Date: 6/13/2011 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "A Woodland Path" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/13/2011 5:35:00 AM
A beautiful dream Andrea,,don't wake up,go back to sleep,he'll come again. Congrats dear on your win with this fine romantic piece. With so much love on PS(Linda's, nette's and yours here), it can't be a bad idea to fall in love all over again :)) have a wonderful day..
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Date: 6/12/2011 4:37:00 PM
wow!!!
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Date: 6/12/2011 3:20:00 PM
that touches my heart truly beautiful thank you
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Date: 6/12/2011 1:46:00 PM
Nice lyrical piece, with a melancholy twist at the end. Looks a good bet for the contest! Love, Robert.
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Date: 6/12/2011 1:26:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest andrea, with a very romantic take on the theme!
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Date: 6/12/2011 11:52:00 AM
Wonderfully written!.Many Congrats on your big win in constance's contest.cheers
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Date: 6/12/2011 11:19:00 AM
A win for you my dear!! well written and my hugs for you.... love Michael
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Date: 6/12/2011 10:53:00 AM
LOVE IT
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Date: 6/12/2011 10:47:00 AM
A lovely poem packed with emotion, Andrea. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/12/2011 9:59:00 AM
Many congrats on your wins, Andrea : ) Thanks for your sweet comments on my blog. So glad you like Sonnet 29 too!
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Date: 6/12/2011 8:49:00 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of constance, Andrea
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Date: 6/12/2011 8:11:00 AM
congratulations, Andrea with your win in my contest with this lovely and beautiful poem~
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