Son-shine at Three

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I say to stop what you are doing when your son calls you to come and look. Special moments in time set in a golden frame. You can never regain lost moments but you can remember the ones that were special.

broach aloha door with a double rainbow arc we can jump rope double dutch

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2024 4:37:00 PM

Hey is the top part with the poem? This can be a haibun. So cute.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/4/2024 4:51:00 PM

It was written separately. :)

Jack Ellison

Date: 6/4/2024 8:06:00 AM

"jump rope double dutch" a childhood memory from way back! Good morning dear friend! Love Happy Jack xxx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/4/2024 4:51:00 PM

Good Evening (now)! Hope the whole day’s been wondrous!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 6/4/2024 5:42:00 AM

Kim, you've built a rainbow bridge that will stick with many of us. Time with kids is important and we'll never have it back. Quite the thing really. Great pun, imagery, and message.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/4/2024 4:54:00 PM

Thank you so much, Duke!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/4/2024 2:48:00 AM

It's been ages since I saw a double rainbow. Great imagery.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/4/2024 5:19:00 AM

Thank you, Victor! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/3/2024 7:17:00 PM

What's a rainbow, merely God's 'routine' handiwork, compared to his extra-special handiwork, i.e, your son doing a double dutch?!! Point made! (Three-pointer!). :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/4/2024 5:20:00 AM

Just a metaphor for the euphoria of a shared moment. God bless you :)