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Sometimes When Shadows Fall

Sometimes when shadows fall across the ridges Spirits conjure up images from the foggy valleys Rapidly fading memories of mountain life yesterday. Majestic crests still whisper hidden secrets of the past-- Escapes from Trails of Tears, wretched poverty, Melungeon peoples and marrying into respectability. Nestled in the hollows were the tiny one-room schools Holding out the only hope of a better life someday, Backwoods holy-rollers, sometimes snake-handlers, Offering salvation to the faithful and the brave. A new generation will someday gaze upon the hills Remembering only, I suspect, that their parents fled Played-out mines, wasted timberlands, failing farms, And made for them a different life in faraway places With large, consolidated educational centers And mega-churches hoisting magnificent steeples. Sometimes when shadows fall across the ridges Spirits conjure up images from foggy valleys Rapidly fading memories of mountain life yesterday. Majestic crests still whisper hidden secrets of the past. July 2, 2022 submitted to "2022 Marathon Mile No. 6" Poetry Contest sponsored by Mark Toney FIRST PLACE WINNER Brian Strand "Informel" Poetry Contest March 14, 2022

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Date: 6/30/2022 8:57:00 PM
How could this not be a winner? iI is a suburb verse from a very accomplished poet. Take care, Milt, Shirley.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/1/2022 8:52:00 AM
Thank you so much, Shirley. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Date: 3/14/2022 7:33:00 PM
"A new generation will someday gaze upon the hills" - Happens. Should happen too. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/14/2022 8:11:00 PM
Thanks so very much, Chris. It's from a long time ago, but it's a goodie, I believe.
Date: 3/7/2021 10:41:00 AM
Hello. I thought I'd look at your very first poem. Try to understand any progression or evolution or just damn fine writing. You certainly started with a big bang. These words make some connections with me personally, NO not that I'm a daught of a sister and brother; though I'm sure some of these righteous folks on this site think so hahaha. But the one room school house and the mines are part of my family's past. So I suppose this poem did conjure up some spirits. Such beautifully written words
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/7/2021 10:54:00 AM
Thanks so much, Marcela. You are too kind. I really enjoyed reading your nice comments.
Date: 12/6/2020 8:00:00 AM
A tremendous first offering. A belated welcome to the Soup. Blessings Rick.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/7/2021 10:54:00 AM
Thanks, Richard. I enjoyed writing about West Virginia, my home state.
Date: 10/29/2020 2:40:00 AM
A favorite of mine, you have a brilliant mind and such a beautiful canopy of words, will be back for sure to read some more. have a blessed day dear poet.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/29/2020 7:43:00 AM
Pixie Dust, you are too kind. Thanks for your response to my poem. Have a wonderful day. I look forward to reading some of your poems.
Date: 10/24/2020 5:47:00 AM
Hi again, Milton: Love the reminiscent tone you set with the shadows conjuring up memories of days gone by. I learned a new word too and what a beauty, ‘Melungeon,’ Thanks for an entertaining read of your diverse poems this AM. Best, SuZ
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/26/2020 2:29:00 PM
Thanks so much for your kind words. Do some research on "Melungeons." They were fascinating people!

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