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Sometimes Time

From past to the present and then into future sometimes time is like a saint and sometimes a butcher.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2012 10:54:00 AM

Kashinath, glad you liked my pine story. I realize, however, it is not truly free verse. I am not sure what it is but I hope Debs will accept it as free verse! I did a metaphor one for Catie, but it's so dang long!!! Will wait to post that one later. Today I make dinner for my daughter's Bday (which is actually on WEd) so I need to get started on it soon. Hope to see some poems from ya. Luv, Andrea

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/8/2012 10:38:00 PM

I'll say. Congratulations on your win. Well done Lee

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2012 3:22:00 PM

oh my gosh, how did I ever miss this one? it's SO clever, Kashinath. I'm surprised it's not higher on the list. One of the more unique ones!!! congrats.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2012 7:28:00 PM

KASH, congratulations, with your awesome couplets in Susan's "Time - single rhyming couplet contest " I really am enjoying many of her winners... good night~PD

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/5/2012 5:38:00 PM

Kash, congrats on your wonderful win! Love, Kim

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 9/5/2012 4:40:00 PM

Ohhhh! Too true! Congratulations on this gem of a write. Cynthia

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 9/5/2012 2:43:00 PM

Excellent couplet, Kash! Congrats on your win...:))

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/5/2012 7:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Time" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/4/2012 10:29:00 PM

cheeeers to you for the great win, kashi... :) huggs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/3/2012 1:42:00 PM

are you absent again, bud?..*wink*... helllo with huggs!.:)

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/3/2012 8:23:00 AM

Friend or foe, brilliant Kash so many questions this asked in a couplet.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/2/2012 1:50:00 PM

amen! Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/2/2012 12:42:00 PM

Truth spoken..We never know what life holds in store for us do we..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Cindy Cayton

Date: 9/2/2012 11:44:00 AM

This is very profound and I have found this to be true much in life~ wow, good one! ~Cindy~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/2/2012 8:45:00 AM

stunning analogy, kashi... a sure slot for you in the winners' list...:) how are you?..;) hugggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/2/2012 8:21:00 AM

powerful write with a punch Kash .. two fantastic lines of pure truth should be a top winning spot luv .. good luck ..

Len Gasun

Date: 9/1/2012 10:30:00 PM

Fabulous couplet of time, Kash! It is so true! hugs :)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/1/2012 5:50:00 PM

My nephew Cory said this poem "blew my mind!" He is just getting into poetry and we were reading thru some of your work together this evening...impressive words like a great Proverb in the Bible....hard to concentrate on writing these days with the busy-ness of the family....gwendolen :)

Joy Wellington

Date: 9/1/2012 4:42:00 PM

Time can be devastating, or it can be our friend! I would rather the latter. Nice write Kash! One love

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/1/2012 2:20:00 PM

Ah, yes, this is so very true my friend! I can see this completely! What an ingenious write Kashi! I love this poem, Great Work!!