Sometimes Red

SOMETIMES        RED



It happens when  I see  a little boy kick a kitten
Or someone’s  three-year-old children 
Having a tantrum in a supermarket
And the parents doing  nothing but watch it
And I say to myself  oh boy I reckon  
I could put that kid’s behavior  right in a second
With my hard right hand
Or when I read of Bono  flying his personal  jet and
Helicopter Into Zambia to witness at first-hand  the demise
Of lions, which he cares “so deeply” about  (tearful eyes)
Those conferences in Paris of heads of state talking 
About  South  America, with starvation and death stalking,
Then adjourning to some palace for dinner and dance
Or David Beckham  giving a charity performance 
Appealing  for the blind kids of Moscow, so “close to” his heart
I don’t know why but whenever I see a politician or upstart
Rich star offering to help some downtrodden
I just feel this way and then I want to burst into sudden 
Laughter at the same time to control the feeling
For who’s kidding who?  These powerful rich “appealing”
Figures could easily give a thousand times as much 
To their ”cause”  without feeling the pinch or even a touch
So I guess it’s their minimalism which gets me going
I feel so…I don’t know….well it’s not the knowing 
But always the same feeling, and it makes me long    
To. . . . . at least the kids don’t clearly know right from wrong
But these adult figures, well I just can’t get my head 
Around their attitudes and it always makes me see red.

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( Emotion  is   anger )

Entered   in   Debbie  Guzzi ‘s  Contest    “Emote”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/27/2011 7:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Emote" contest Syd. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 1:44:00 AM
So powerful, Sydney. Many congrats on your well deserved SUPER WIN. Lainie.
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Date: 6/23/2011 8:05:00 AM
I can so identify with that feeling of rage of the injustice of the world...and those who feed off the misfortune...you have said it better than I could. Well done, Syd!
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Sidney Beck
Date: 6/23/2011 8:45:00 AM
yeah Carrie, i guess you're right, injustice is the key word it always makes me wanna get up and do something about it you know......thanks for your kind support ... best wishes Syd
Date: 6/22/2011 8:01:00 PM
Yup, one can definitely see red sometimes, with boiling blood to boot... Super congrats on your win with this Sydney!
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Date: 6/22/2011 3:45:00 PM
congratulations on your emotional poem and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/22/2011 3:38:00 PM
The insincerity of politicals and new stars outrages me as well, Syd. Boy, this poem is packed with anger. Congratulations on your big win in Deb's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Sidney Beck
Date: 6/23/2011 8:43:00 AM
Thanks for your kind remarks...yes i guess its true....mylines there were filled with anger and maybe i didnt even realise the extent of it....L O L ....... live and learn Carolyn
Date: 6/22/2011 2:51:00 PM
Most excellent winning write and in so many ways I couldn't agree more!Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love
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Sidney Beck
Date: 6/23/2011 8:38:00 AM
Again Deb thank you for your kind placing for my worthless crap.....listen, its a surprise to me how your contests have a tendency t o expose my inner anger......normally i am taken for a pretty easy going guy with lots of humor, but I guess it disguises a real hidden anger at lots of things..i've often said that if yo u read a lot of somebody's poetry you get to know that person quite well...do you agree..? best wishes a s always.. Angry Syd
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