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Sometimes it seems Life is so unfair But whose choice Is it any how Occasionally we do nothing Then mumble and groan About our wasted day There are times When things happen Out of our control But its how we Manage it that matters most Take a look Upon that shelf Are you Still stuck there Or running free What are you Trying to achieve Only we Can make a change Sometimes Life is so great It’s what we do That makes the difference Our choice permanently Never sometimes

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Date: 4/9/2016 5:05:00 PM
Hi Gail, Excellent write. Very inspiring. Reminds one of the uncomfortable fact that the only person responsible for their achievements or lack thereof is starin' atcha in the mirror. Cheers, Brian
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Gail Underwood
Date: 4/25/2016 6:43:00 PM
Hi Brian, Thank you for your visit, pleased you liked my poem. Yes so true Brian, we are the only ones responsible for our achievements and our actions, Thanks Gail
Date: 4/5/2016 2:21:00 AM
Gail, life is unfair a lot of times but it is how we handle it that is the most important, a deep write that I am loving 7 ~
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Gail Underwood
Date: 4/5/2016 7:42:00 PM
Thank you, So very true Broken Wings, I have been on many a journey where it seems so bleak but it was what i did about it that helped me through. Thank you for giving this poem a 7
Date: 4/3/2016 11:51:00 AM
I am with you specially on the last two line. Great job...Pashang
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Gail Underwood
Date: 4/3/2016 11:55:00 AM
Thank you Pashang
Date: 4/3/2016 10:15:00 AM
This is true well written x nice to meet you Gail xx
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Gail Underwood
Date: 4/3/2016 11:54:00 AM
Thank you Wendy, nice to meet you also
Date: 4/2/2016 7:46:00 AM
Much wisdom imbedded in this piece.
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Gail Underwood
Date: 4/3/2016 5:59:00 AM
Yes so true, Thank you Richard
Date: 3/15/2016 10:45:00 PM
Love the pace and the ponder.
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Gail Underwood
Date: 3/15/2016 11:13:00 PM
Thank you Timothy