Sometimes

Sometimes it seems
Life is so unfair
But whose choice
Is it any how
Occasionally we do nothing
Then mumble and groan
About our wasted day
There are times
When things happen
Out of our control
But its how we
Manage it that matters most
Take a look
Upon that shelf
Are you 
Still stuck there
Or running free
What are you
Trying to achieve
Only we
Can make a change
Sometimes
Life is so great
It’s what we do
That makes the difference
Our choice permanently
Never sometimes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/9/2016 5:05:00 PM
Hi Gail, Excellent write. Very inspiring. Reminds one of the uncomfortable fact that the only person responsible for their achievements or lack thereof is starin' atcha in the mirror. Cheers, Brian
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Gail Underwood
Date: 4/25/2016 6:43:00 PM
Hi Brian, Thank you for your visit, pleased you liked my poem. Yes so true Brian, we are the only ones responsible for our achievements and our actions, Thanks Gail
Date: 4/5/2016 2:21:00 AM
Gail, life is unfair a lot of times but it is how we handle it that is the most important, a deep write that I am loving 7 ~
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Gail Underwood
Date: 4/5/2016 7:42:00 PM
Thank you, So very true Broken Wings, I have been on many a journey where it seems so bleak but it was what i did about it that helped me through. Thank you for giving this poem a 7
Date: 4/3/2016 11:51:00 AM
I am with you specially on the last two line. Great job...Pashang
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Gail Underwood
Date: 4/3/2016 11:55:00 AM
Thank you Pashang
Date: 4/3/2016 10:15:00 AM
This is true well written x nice to meet you Gail xx
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Gail Underwood
Date: 4/3/2016 11:54:00 AM
Thank you Wendy, nice to meet you also
Date: 4/2/2016 7:46:00 AM
Much wisdom imbedded in this piece.
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Gail Underwood
Date: 4/3/2016 5:59:00 AM
Yes so true, Thank you Richard
Date: 3/15/2016 10:45:00 PM
Love the pace and the ponder.
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Gail Underwood
Date: 3/15/2016 11:13:00 PM
Thank you Timothy
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