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Sometimes

Translucent or see through Or sparkling mirror’s view I am not always I Sometimes I become you

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/25/2011 6:09:00 AM

I am stopping by to read some of your amazing poetry today and I wish to thank you for commenting on my poetry. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with much inspiration Mohammad. Love, Carol

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/9/2009 5:41:00 AM

Wonderful quatrain...very thought-provoking! ~Juliane

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/30/2009 12:36:00 PM

Interesting and thought provoking words put to pen. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara

Alisa Cook

Date: 11/30/2009 4:54:00 AM

this peom is said good. it's more into life and self. we see our selves in the mirror ,but we can also see our selves though someone alse's . thank you for your comment's on my peom's . god bless u alway's . alisa

Farah Chamma

Date: 5/18/2009 6:34:00 AM

A wonderful write Mohammed...Leaves one with thought... Always, Farah

Date: 4/27/2009 1:46:00 PM

Interesting perspective captured in just four lines, leaving the reader with something to ponder. Nice job! Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Have a wonderful week! Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/24/2009 4:40:00 PM

That is truly knowing someone inside and out. Lovely work! ~ Love, Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/23/2009 1:01:00 PM

Now that is a closeness extremely rare and special. Unique, beautiful and I feel I know such a connection. Love, Shar