Something's missing

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there's something missing i don't know what but that gaping hole leaves me feeling blue there's an emptiness within whose silence is louder than its scream ~ a heart in constant search with hunger pangs that have no remedy so night and day i seek for that special something that feels like peace AP: Honorable Mention 2025

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 5/19/2025 12:24:00 AM

Nip heart contractions in the bud, before they grow, is what I’d suggest. Witnessing flow of thought that ebb and flow like tides, in vibrant nonchalance, we say, ‘these thought are noticed, which come to body-mind, which I am not’ and reflecting thus, peace is restored. I find this method quite effective.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/20/2025 1:31:00 PM

Sitting in the backseat and not taking charge of our life is not usually the best route to take.