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Something Wonderful This Way Comes

Something wonderful this way comes The other guys stare at him What is he seeing? He must have eagle eyes As she gets closer they understand She is glorious, not a local girl Dressed fancy; who is she? Old Man Hickson’s granddaughter maybe? Edna Forrester’s niece? They cannot take their eyes off her. She is a marvel. She walks past, and they are too stunned to whistle. She has an air about her That has rendered them speechless.

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Date: 1/18/2022 12:34:00 PM
and apparently whistleless, too. Terry said it so well, Caren. Perfect description of a moment in passing.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/19/2022 11:08:00 PM
Thank you Hank. No whistles any more due to the agressive woman/fear factor.
Date: 1/18/2022 8:53:00 AM
I Love This! a perfect description of a moment.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/18/2022 8:53:00 AM
Thank you Terry
Date: 1/18/2022 5:43:00 AM
there are those that garner attention as they enter and THOSE that hold that attention as they capture the room. Nicely described moment Caren
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/18/2022 8:53:00 AM
Thank you John. I was inspired by a photo of a gorgeous young woman.

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