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Something Must Have Gone Wrong

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IF Man, the epitome of creation, was supposed to be Obviously, something must have gone wrong with Divinity’s plan For how else can we explain the unleash of hate, war, and killing Plus the abominable pollution of water, air, and land? * © Demetrios Trifiatis 23 APRIL 2020 * When last night, I realized it was Earth's Day, I wrote this poem but I decided to post it today because it was too late!

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Sandra Adams

Date: 4/24/2020 9:44:00 PM

one cannot destroy something forever, eventually they will pay for the torment they caused in their neglectful ways... one can only hope they learn and have a chance to make right of their wrongs... hugs and blessings :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/24/2020 1:40:00 AM

Great poetry, Demetrios, the message so clear..what amazes me regarding all the troubles today especially wars, is, it always seems to be coming from the followers of one man..I'm thinking of China and Russia North Korea, and then Iran, Only a handful of kilometre's away from yourself.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/24/2020 2:05:00 AM

You are right my friend, harry although I could add some more countries in your list! We have to learn to live for one another and not just for ourselves. Thank you for visiting and commenting. Blessings! Stay safe!

Eve Roper

Date: 4/23/2020 8:46:00 PM

I do hear that because the Quarantine the quality of air and water has reached the early 1900's.Beautiful red rose bud, perfect with the verse of beauty. Hugs eve

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/24/2020 12:53:00 AM

Thank you dearest, Eve for your understanding! Yes, now we can see that we are the cause of many of the ills the planet suffers! I have written many times on the same subject warning of upcoming calamities! God bless you! Hugs xxx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/23/2020 8:42:00 AM

It seems during this time the earth is getting a break. This piece causes one to think. Blessings my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/23/2020 3:07:00 PM

Yes, it takes fact that support my argument dearest , Richard. Let us hope that we have learned something my good friend. Blessings!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/23/2020 7:04:00 AM

Your message resonates my friend. The budding red rose is simply awesome.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/23/2020 7:34:00 AM

How many would take my message seriously my friend, Vijay? Not many. Our planet will though it will retaliate in many unforeseen ways. Hope I am wrong! Thank you . Blessings.

Julie Achilles

Date: 4/23/2020 4:25:00 AM

Earth Day- I am missing things- but yes man destroys the earth and each other, and do we learn? I hope so Demetrios the future depends on it, Hugs Julie xxxx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/23/2020 6:04:00 AM

True our future depends on what we are going to do from now on! The planet showed it could recover if we do not keep destroy it ! Thank you dearest, Julie . Hugs xxx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/23/2020 2:30:00 AM

What a state the world is in, and mankind still carries on regardless. He has no shame. Tom. P. S. Did you manage to sort out the glich?

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/23/2020 3:08:00 AM

We are in complete agreement my friend Tom. Thank you for lovely visit and comment. Yes, the problem is resolved. Thank you!