Something About Oatmeal

My fortunes drop from my hands with despair.
Pearls that plop on the sand are the rest of me that's left to bare.
Juggling gorillas and dinosaur tea parties swirl in discordant dance,
While my aimless mind presses spring in Hamburg 'gainst a wintry France.

All lives re-awake each morning with a choice to laugh or cry,
Since there is no door for the key you hold, no pan for the egg to fry.
So with oatmeal in your hands you run from house to house,
"Is this sad or is this funny?" You add you use to be a mouse.

And when even the flag of writing is held against a vacant wind
You meet metal with wood and not as wood and your heart you feel has sinned,
For not to laugh at the madness of sternness is to lose our only magic power.
To fall from branches that were never there is to star in the saddest movie of the hour.

Grieve not if your gift seems little now where once you shot rockets.
Remember: you were once a mouse, and now your have oatmeal in your pockets.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/27/2010 3:09:00 PM
a very interesting poem, Matt. Congratulations for your unique writing with this winining poem. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/26/2010 3:54:00 PM
Congrats Matt on your super win in Dr. Ram's contest with this amazing entry so expressive and quite impressive to read luv.. enjoy a grand win tonight luv..
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Date: 10/26/2010 3:33:00 PM
Congratulations Matt, on your placement in the top ten. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/26/2010 1:29:00 PM
I love the picture of oatmeal in your pockest. Love the whole of it.. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/26/2010 12:12:00 PM
Congrats on your win in contest ...........Luv/Best wishes always......Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/26/2010 9:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest Matt. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2010 8:22:00 AM
You have approached the theme in quite a different style, I enjoyed thw write, Matt. Congratulations on this well deserved win.
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