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This verse was Inspired by the song "My Immortal" by Evanesence. Such a beautiful and emotionaly deep song, one of my favorites. I hope you enjoy the read.

Someone to Care I’m weary of this haunting place, Trapped by insecurities and fears' embrace. I yearn for them to flee, To vanish without a trace, For this oppression still clings, a ceaseless chase, And it won’t leave me be. This mental anguish fails to mend, The pain too raw, too real to comprehend, Echoes of abuse, time can't erase, My arms reach out, in hope's embrace, Praying for someone to care. When tears fall, no hand to wipe them clear, When screams pierce, no refuge from my fears, Amidst the terrors, trembling hand unclaimed, No solace found, in shadows unnamed. I once knew joy, beneath the sun's bright gleam, Now ensnared by darkness, a recurring theme, Demons haunt my dreams' once tranquil streams, Sanity lost, in silent screams. This mental anguish fails to mend, The pain too raw, too real to comprehend, Echoes of abuse, time can't erase, My heart laid bare, seeking grace, Longing for someone to care. When tears fall, no hand to wipe them clear, When screams pierce, no refuge from my fears, In the midst of terrors, trembling hand unclaimed, No comfort found, in shadows unnamed. I've urged myself, time and again, to move on, To gather strength, my resolve to don, But these demons prove too much to bear, They creep along the halls, in the candle's glare, They linger still, in my despair. Won’t someone save me? -Edward

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Date: 4/25/2024 7:46:00 AM
' My Immortal, ' by Evanesence is, and has always been a favorite of mine. Your thoughts hold meaning and depth, with so many emotions bleeding through. The longing within is evident. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. So tender and beautiful, all at the sane time. It's nice to meet you, Edward. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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Edward Wraith
Date: 4/26/2024 10:28:00 PM
Thank you Brandy for your kind words and beautiful feedback. I am so pleased my interpretation resonated with you. I appreciate you taking the time to respond. Have a wonderful evening.
Date: 4/19/2024 5:02:00 AM
Hello Edward, your poem is deeply evocative. I liked that through your powerful words; you captured the profound sense of isolation and despair that accompanies mental anguish and past trauma. The imagery you use to depict the relentless pursuit of inner peace amidst disturbing memories is hauntingly beautiful. It's a brave and vulnerable piece that sheds light on the longing for support and understanding in the face of inner turmoil. It's the importance of compassion and empathy in our darkest moments. - Blessings, Daniel
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Edward Wraith
Date: 4/19/2024 6:48:00 AM
Daniel, your kind words are appreciated, but the true credit belongs to Ben Moody and Amy Lee of Evanescence for crafting such a deeply emotional and compelling song. Thank you for investing your time in reading and reflecting on my interpretation, though it undoubtedly falls short of the original composition. If you haven’t already, I highly recommend giving the original piece a listen. Have a wonderful day

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