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Someone Said, Hey Christopher

Someone said, Hey Christopher Someone said, “Hey Christopher, what’s up with all this love It seems in every poem that is all you’re thinking of Why are you always dreaming, why is it you can’t see That love is just a legend, a made up fallacy The world is filled with evil, don’t you watch the news CNN or NBC or others you can choose Clinton is a liar, Trump is just a creep They’ll both destroy the nation for fortunes that they reap Murders by the thousands, death is in the streets I can’t believe you haven’t seen within the many tweets Our water is polluted, we’re choking on the air Hate is growing rapidly, why are you not aware Prices through the ceiling, paychecks in the ground Protesters are screaming, you can hear them all around There’s war in other countries, servers have been hacked Innocent bystanders are caught in the attack Little kids are crying, not enough to eat Begging just to make it, sleeping in the street So tell me, will you Christopher, what’s up with what you write Every poem filled with love, morning, noon and night” I looked at him a moment, this person I now see And then replied, “I’m sorry sir, were you talking to me? I was writing out a poem for the one I do adore I didn’t hear you talking, could you say it all once more?” He just walked away shaking his head

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Date: 4/14/2017 12:45:00 PM
Cheers, Chris. : ) This is a great read! (And yes - some of us have had thoughts along those lines. ; )
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Chris Green
Date: 4/14/2017 12:52:00 PM
I'm sure about that. :) Thanks Doug
Date: 4/10/2017 9:48:00 AM
Ha ha, loved your unique way to bring notice to serious issues of life:) so, your name is Christopher, is it ??
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Chris Green
Date: 4/10/2017 9:54:00 AM
Well....no one calls me Christopher but it allowed the poem to flow much better. : ) Thanks so much Jo, I appreciate your visit and kindness.
Date: 4/6/2017 8:36:00 PM
Chris, there is so much misery around we desperately need your poems to help tip the scales the other way. I loved the humorous touch in this one:) Amitiés
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Chris Green
Date: 4/7/2017 8:24:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend. I am happy this one brought some humor your way and hopefully a smile to your face.
Date: 4/6/2017 1:54:00 PM
Love it! We are fortunate enough to read the writing you share with us and brightness that you give us. I am so grateful! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 4/6/2017 2:21:00 PM
Aw, thank you so much my friend. That really makes me smile and the truth is, it is you and everyone else on here who do the same for me. Thank you again Heidi.
Date: 4/6/2017 1:45:00 PM
Exactly for all that is in your poem, it is so good that love exists, so much so that we can lose ourselves there. Delightful poem, this one, Christopher my friend :)
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Chris Green
Date: 4/6/2017 1:53:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend. I find myself lost in it often. Though it doesn't stop the bad things from happening, it does allow me to escape for a while.
Date: 4/6/2017 1:33:00 PM
Did someone really ask you that question Christopher?:).Once someone told me that my poems are fairytales..and I should write with more depth..but fairytales are an escape from harsh realities..and your enchanting poems are like sweet manna in a desert..So listen to me..Dont listen to him or whoever was...Keep writing magic...Your poetry is art..and a breath of sweet perfume..Christopher:)..You write the best poems ever...and Hey Hope you are reading mycomment and not lost thinking about Her :)
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Chris Green
Date: 4/6/2017 1:39:00 PM
Of course I am reading your comment, that is always something I look forward to. :) No, no one asked me that, this is just my imagination going crazy. And as long as you keep leaving wonderful encouraging comments like this, I won't let anything distract me while I am writing. :) Thank you so very much my sweet friend.
Date: 4/6/2017 1:19:00 PM
This is hilarious! I guess it wasn't worth repeating! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 4/6/2017 1:24:00 PM
Thanks so much Kim. I guess it wasn't.
Date: 4/6/2017 1:17:00 PM
All ya need is love...doop da doo da doo. Wonderful poem, Chris. A superb expression that provides the solution to all of the world's problems, I believe. Well, it doesn't solve the issue that our president spends more time on twitter than a 17 year old girl who can't figure out why she hasn't been asked to prom yet, but I applaude you all the same
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 4/6/2017 1:50:00 PM
Hahaha. Please let your next poem be about that experience. I've been to Arkansas exactly once, and that was more than enough
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Chris Green
Date: 4/6/2017 1:45:00 PM
The really funny thing is, I was in Little Rock last year and walked past a cigar shop on the main business street and couldn't stop laughing. And the kicker is, the main business street is named President Clinton Ave. :)
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 4/6/2017 1:32:00 PM
And somewhere in Arkansas the owner of a small cigar shop smiled. Your reply made me snort out Red Bull while laughing. Consequently, now I'm crying
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Chris Green
Date: 4/6/2017 1:24:00 PM
What does the 17 year old look like, Bill Clinton isn't busy on that night. :) Just being an equal opportunity commenter. Thanks Phillip, I appreciate you stopping by.
Date: 4/6/2017 1:16:00 PM
Yup, that love stuff filters out all the noise of the world around us, nice job Christopher, keep the love coming!
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Chris Green
Date: 4/6/2017 1:22:00 PM
Thanks so much John, I will do my best.
Date: 4/6/2017 1:11:00 PM
lol...a one track mind Christopher...love is what makes the world go round.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/6/2017 1:21:00 PM
Thanks Tim, well what else is there to think about? :)
Date: 4/6/2017 12:35:00 PM
Hey Christopher, With all the hate going on in our world, why not write about love? Your poetry makes me forget about that. Do me a favor don't ever stop gifting us with your poetry. A without doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 4/6/2017 1:21:00 PM
Thanks Alexis, I can always count on you for a smile.
Date: 4/6/2017 12:29:00 PM
Yes, love conquers all and reigns supreme for a lover.I have to read all your poems now:)
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Chris Green
Date: 4/6/2017 1:21:00 PM
Thanks so much Sara, I am happy you liked this one.

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