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I'll find a remedy for my broken heart. A round of applause, you've melt my heart to stone. I couldn't make you feel my love, from the start. I'll find someone like you, I'll search for a clone. A round of applause, you've melt my heart to stone. All I ask is don't come back with a hello. I'll find someone like you, I'll search for a clone. I'll keep chasing pavements to find that rainbow. All I ask is don't come back with a hello. One last goodbye to your sweetest devotion. I'll keep chasing pavements to find that rainbow, Set fire to the rain and show no emotion. One last goodbye to your sweetest devotion. No turning tables, stop rolling in the deep. Set fire to the rain and show no emotion, its water under the bridge, I shall not weep. No turning tables, stop rolling in the deep. Rumour has it, there's a new name on your tongue. Its water under the bridge, I shall not weep. Forget broken promises, from when we were young. Rumour has it, there's a new name on your tongue. I couldn't make you feel my love, from the start. Forget broken promises, from when we were young. I'll find a remedy for my broken heart. The Silent One 17 November 2017
Pantoum rhyme poem with 11 syllables per line. The pantoum poem consists of 16 Adele song titles. Titles are below. The pantoum consists of a series of quatrains rhyming ABAB in which the second and fourth lines of a quatrain recur as the first and third lines in the succeeding quatrain; each quatrain introduces a new second rhyme as BCBC, CDCD. The first line of the series recurs as the last line of the closing quatrain, and third line of the poem recurs as the second line of the closing quatrain, rhyming ZAZA Remedy Melt my heart to stone Someone like you All I ask Hello Chasing pavements don't you remember I can't make you love me Make you feel my love Sweetest devotion Set fire to the rain Turning tables Rolling in the deep Water under the bridge Rumour has itl When we were young

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Date: 12/22/2019 12:49:00 PM
A huge fan of Adele and a awesome way to use her songs. love phyl
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Date: 9/20/2018 11:43:00 PM
Adele I do not know. Yet this pantoum was very well done. To use song titles was excellent. I did one one time out of book titles. Thank you for the visit.
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Date: 2/7/2018 3:54:00 PM
Wow I'm a huge Adele's fan, so it was a real pleasure to read this work. You're creative and witty:)
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Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 3:56:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 1/5/2018 4:20:00 PM
This is really good...I like the pantoum style.
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Silent One
Date: 1/5/2018 4:23:00 PM
Thanks... I have a few of these..
Date: 12/11/2017 3:21:00 PM
You're good at these types of poems!
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Date: 12/1/2017 2:27:00 PM
A very constructive write that inspired my inner heart into someone like you song...Yet I have lost my love for music and am not as passionate about my talent as I used to be. This poem is a great use of song titles and very creative.
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Date: 11/25/2017 2:15:00 PM
Superb piece of work! I am in awe at your prowess.
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Date: 11/21/2017 1:24:00 PM
Interesting work..Very creative using those song titles..Thanks for the visits to my page..I appreciate you reading my poems..Sara
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Date: 11/20/2017 11:47:00 PM
Well done. It's difficult enough doing pantoum without adding this complication of the song titles into the mix. Weren't you the judge that had us do this a long time ago? Or maybe we were doing any kind of poem we wanted!
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Silent One
Date: 11/21/2017 7:52:00 AM
Yes you are right, that is exactly what I did.. was some great poems.. thank you for the feedback..
Date: 11/20/2017 9:50:00 PM
Pantoum form is great as was the poem! Thank you for posting! :-)
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Silent One
Date: 11/21/2017 7:52:00 AM
Thank you Donna..
Date: 11/19/2017 5:25:00 PM
Hi Silent, I really enjoy the "Pantoum" form. I love Adele and love how you incorporated all her songs in this well written poem. You did an excellent job and I felt every word. Well done :-) Alexis
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Silent One
Date: 11/21/2017 7:52:00 AM
Thank you Alexis..
Date: 11/19/2017 8:02:00 AM
oh my, I love this! I knew right away what the titles were, She's one of my favorite artists. Plus... To Make You Feel My Love is me and Bo's song.just sayin...thanks for sharing, always loved pantoums too. Be blessed sweet man!!!! -lllulloo
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Silent One
Date: 11/19/2017 8:07:00 AM
Isnt Bo a dog? lol!!!
Date: 11/19/2017 6:27:00 AM
Wow, Silent One, another excellent pantoum well crafted with so many song titles:) amazing poetry:)
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Silent One
Date: 11/19/2017 6:45:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/18/2017 8:26:00 PM
A cleverly written awesome poem interwoven with Adele's awesome songs Silent One! Beautiful pantoum!~Che :)
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Silent One
Date: 11/19/2017 6:45:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/18/2017 3:27:00 PM
Holy moly this is awesomeness...My goodness, I think you're my hero now. The master of Pantoum. An absolutely gorgeous piece, Silent One... hugs and smiles :)
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Silent One
Date: 11/19/2017 6:45:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/18/2017 5:09:00 AM
Wonderfully written... Such a clever write... I loved it... Thanks for sharing this fantastic piece SO...
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Silent One
Date: 11/19/2017 6:46:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/18/2017 2:58:00 AM
oh...I was wondering why those words are in bold. Now I get it. I guess you really like Adele. The form seems complicated to me, but you pulled it off.
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Silent One
Date: 11/19/2017 6:47:00 AM
Thank you Eileen, I have done a few on different artists, thought I would give Adele a try..
Date: 11/17/2017 8:41:00 PM
Silent One, a lovely and melancholic write about heartbreak using Adele's song titles deftly woven together with your wonderful words. You captured the sad emotions effectively with your skilled pen. Enthralling write!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 11/19/2017 9:35:00 AM
Hmm.., 'MAYBE TOMORROW, with a poem I'll fly - To my muse, I NEVER CAN SAY GOODBYE'.., whooo whooo baby, never can say goodbye no no no no no no ohhhhh.... lol! Sorry got carried away there... :) J5 titles - we'll see what the future holds...
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Silent One
Date: 11/19/2017 6:47:00 AM
Thank you Susan, would be great to see you do an artist with your great pantoum skills..
Date: 11/17/2017 5:50:00 PM
Oh wow you have done it again. This time with one of my favourite singers, crafting those song titles into a poem that makes sense is a feat in itself. Bravo....Maria
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Silent One
Date: 11/19/2017 6:48:00 AM
Thank you Maria, when using music titles it can be difficult, but this one is really a simple one using her songs..
Date: 11/17/2017 4:01:00 PM
Your knowledge of the subject is beyond me... Thank you for posting... All the best SO
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Silent One
Date: 11/19/2017 6:48:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/17/2017 2:42:00 PM
Brilliantly created Silent. Bravo! : )
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Silent One
Date: 11/19/2017 6:49:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/17/2017 2:16:00 PM
You wove the titles nicely into your poem S1....Very nice write
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Silent One
Date: 11/17/2017 2:29:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 11/17/2017 12:40:00 PM
I don't know how you do this but I just love it!!! What you do is incredible. Happy Friday!!!!
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Silent One
Date: 11/17/2017 2:28:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 11/17/2017 10:43:00 AM
Another pantoum masterpiece, Maestro SO! You got this elevated intricate musical template down to a science. If I recall correctly, you did Frank Sinatra songs in a pantoum form. Brilliant poetry as always from your glowing pen. Love and joy always.
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Silent One
Date: 11/17/2017 2:25:00 PM
Thank you Freddie, not too happy with this one, almost did not post it.. I have done Frankie, Elvis, Beatles, Michael Jackson, Queen and one on musicals...
Date: 11/17/2017 9:02:00 AM
This is really amazing SO, I find this form daunting, I don't know why, but anyway you seem to write pantoums with relative ease, this is a great example...love Adele!
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Silent One
Date: 11/17/2017 9:11:00 AM
Thank you John, once you have the first few lines, it gets easier, the tricky part is getting the lines in the first stanza to flow with the last ones..
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